Sales page proofreading
I may be new to the game, and I understand that you can't afford a copywriter. Give it your best shot, I admire that you are making the attempt.
But find someone to read it over to make sure that it meets some sort of minimum standard. There is no way I am sending someone to a page that is so poorly structured that the beginning letter in the third sentence isn't capitalized. In fact that's about when I hit the back button.
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