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What's wrong about my landing page?

by Irmscher
9 replies
I am promoting Wartol Homeopathic Remedy.

here is my landing page : no-genitalwarts.com (sorry still can post links)

I've got about 50 steady targeted visitors to my website and only 7-8 in averge gets to the merchant's page. So I suggest click ratio is pretty poor.

Can anyone say what's wrong about my landing page, there is definitely.

Thanks for your time
Irmscher
#landing #page #wrong
  • Profile picture of the author tommorow
    Hey mate !
    I am also new to the forum but I see a few problems on your landing page.
    The first thing is that the photos in the testimonial section are not available. You should check them out and fix them. And also I think that adding a logo to your site will make it more attractive.
    Cheers !
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    • Profile picture of the author rosetrees
      Change the headline. Getting rid of genital warts isn't about saving time and money!

      Proofread. The testimonials in particular just sound made up. Even the one from the Mr Chimney in Scotland sounds as if it was written by someone's whose first language isn't English.
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  • Profile picture of the author jasondinner
    I made a jing video critiquing your page.

    It's about 3 minutes long and may help a bit:

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    cheers,
    Jason
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    The page needs a complete re-write from top to bottom. It's loaded with grammar and spelling errors. The layout is lacking as well. If you're serious about this project and want to stop wasting traffic, get a professional to create your page. Good Luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author Irmscher
      Originally Posted by travlinguy View Post

      The page needs a complete re-write from top to bottom. It's loaded with grammar and spelling errors. The layout is lacking as well. If you're serious about this project and want to stop wasting traffic, get a professional to create your page. Good Luck.
      Yeah I was thinking about this but it'd be kinda costly... somwthing about 1000$ per one sales page, am I right ?
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