Site Feedback Requested

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Hi folks,

I'd like some feedback on a couple of my sites. I'm basically brand new to all of this, so please be brutally honest. The first site is an attempt a basic review site / information site monetized with adsense and amazon. Not thrilled with it, but I've only got a few hours into it.

The second site is more of a long term project. Eventually it will be an authority site on personal finance. Just started on it today, so the content is a little lame and lacking. Monetized with CPA offers right now. Long term I'll be launching a series of products in personal finance.

NAS Reviews
Freedom Finance System - Everything You Need To Know About Personal Finance

Thanks
-Paul
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  • Profile picture of the author PhoebeSmellyCat
    I don't know much about computers or storage systems but for that site, I think the call-to-action is not prominent enough.

    Use sub-headlines to guide your reader. A lot of web surfers skim text so I would bold the benefits of each product.

    For the personal finance site, the white on black text is hard on my eyes. Of course, that could be due to age :rolleyes:

    You will need to adjust your sidebar. Your ads are being cut off.

    I will post back if I find more.
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  • Profile picture of the author matt5409
    for the nas reviews, the content is good but you need to link up those images to your amazon page for maximum clicks.
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    • Profile picture of the author packerfan
      Thanks! Done. Thought I did that, but obviously not.

      Keep em coming.
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  • Profile picture of the author coolseo
    Originally Posted by packerfan View Post

    Thanks! Done. Thought I did that, but obviously not.

    Keep em coming.
    Add a good meta description to finance site.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mrs S
    I just checked out the NAS site (because I recently bought one!) here's my thoughts:

    Lose the Google ads - if I find your site because I want to buy a NAS I don't want to get distracted by ads about the new Google phone.

    Use sub headings to break up the content. Turn those #1 product name sentences into header 3 tags.

    Add some paragraph breaks - at the moment you have chunks of text that is difficult to read.

    Left align your text.

    Make sure where you give a call to action that it actually contains a link - ie you can read exactly why this is the #1 selling NAS system on all of Amazon, and just what customers had to say here. I thought this would be a link but it wasn't.

    These "top 3" type reviews can be successful - my two most popular reviews this Christmas (and those that made the most money) were "top 5" comparison reviews.

    Good luck
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    • Profile picture of the author Bannaz
      NSA Reviews - Nice blue color scheme - could do with larger headings for each of your articles.

      Freedom Finance - Clear navigation - could do with more imagery to give viewers more interest.
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      • Profile picture of the author packerfan
        I tried to submit in a different post, but can you guys take a look at this site?

        alternativestoipad dot com

        When I post a link my post gets deleted. I'm not spamming, I haven't even started promoting this site yet. Just got it redesigned today. Not a ton of content yet, but I'm planning on making it a long term project I think.
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