Please tell me what you guys really think about my new blog

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It's about making money work from home, and i would really love to hear of what some you guys out there have to say about it, just keep it really

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  • Profile picture of the author Lazy
    Well, the layout isn't terrible. I like the island leisure theme.

    The content is good, but you need line breaks in your text. Your articles are walls of texts.

    Line breaks mean easy reading, and more attentive readers.

    Also, perhaps consider changing the white background. It's not offensive on the eyes or anything, but it's not the easiest to read. Your articles are long, so your readers are going to spend a lot of time on your site, so they need an easier background color to stare at.

    Hope this helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author wassim
    David,

    change your background from black to light gray, and add a shadow to the left and right borders of your main white division. This will help visitors read better.

    See what the guys at "BuySellAds.com" are doing. Check how easy it is to read on their page. Also avoid the extreme use of black color for texts. Use dark gray for main text and colored titled to grab visitor's attention (Light blue is always great on a white background).

    To be honest with you, I can't even read a few lines of your articles...

    Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author AlexNeill
    Hey David,

    I don't really like the blog header image, would prob suggest you get one designed, maybe branded more.

    Also add the break in your posts, with the link to read more.

    You have no categorizes, would change that to some related keyword ones.

    Would also add your photograph to your about me and maybe an optin form
    to your blog side bar offering a freebie of some sort if you intend to build a list.

    Alex.
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    • Profile picture of the author Davidoriol1986
      I am making some changing while you guys helping me out and thanks
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      • Profile picture of the author Lazy
        Originally Posted by Davidoriol1986 View Post

        I am making some changing while you guys helping me out and thanks
        You've already learned one of the biggest secrets in effective marketing. Ask for help! Peer review is an amazing thing. Keep up the good work, David.
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    • Profile picture of the author Robert Boduch
      Hi David...

      Here are a few quick things you can do to improve your blog:

      1. Change your title. It sounds too generic. The subject is a popular one... but you need to distinguish yourself from any run-of-the-mill site.

      2. Change your sub-head. "Making money online can be extremely difficult" sends the wrong kind of message to your audience and it contradicts the beach lifestyle your images portray.

      3. Add occasional images, and sub-heads throughout your text to break it up. You need to make it appear inviting and real easy to read. Break it up do it's not one continuous page of text and you'll be better serving your visitors.

      Robert
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  • Profile picture of the author Davidoriol1986
    the6thplayer you currently send me a private message but i can't reply back to you cause i don't have 50 post as yet, but my answer to your question is yes
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