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Help with sales page

by Roz3377
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Okay, this is my sales page to a book I wrote myself and that I am selling. I am working on traffic and have gotten almost 100 hits this week but have NO sales through my website. I have sales via Amazon but I make more if I can sell them directly through my website. So, can you all please help me with this page and let me know how I can convert more sales? Thanks!

GodlyWhispers dot com

Marsha
#page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Fitzwise
    It looks really nice . I noticed that you used * in the top and than you used -in the next section maybe keep them in the same format. I would probably bold the questions. The green writing was a little hard for me to read. But other than that I liked it.
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    You need a much better headline at the top. I could see a lot of people who would find this book useful just leaving right away because they don't know what it's really about.
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    • Profile picture of the author JulianKane
      I see that you made some changes already... maybe shorten it a little as it is a little long right now- less is more.
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      • Profile picture of the author WillR
        Originally Posted by dlackner View Post

        I see that you made some changes already... maybe shorten it a little as it is a little long right now- less is more.
        There is no such thing as too long. If it takes you ten pages to get the message across effectively then that's how long it should be. If you can get it across in 1 page then that's how long it should be. Never use 6 pages when 5 will do. But don't think you are limited to a certain number of pages.

        Some of the best sales letters online are 20-30 pages long. The content of the sales letter is much more important than the length. It's the content that will and should determine the length.
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