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11-26-2008, 10:16 AM
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| Banned War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2006
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|  So proud - best copy I've ever written
Hey everyone, I've just written a free report for my market and I'm so proud of it because it's the best copy I've ever written! If you're struggling for copywriting ideas then you could get a lot from what I've done. I went on a creative megadrive!!! Take a look and let me know what you think: DietingZine The Death Of Dieting (just click on the book) Thanks guys, Rich |
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11-26-2008, 10:31 AM
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| Re: So proud - best copy I've ever written
Like it! Nice to see you in other niches too. |
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11-26-2008, 10:39 AM
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| Re: So proud - best copy I've ever written
hehe thanks! Just takes creativity and providing peeps with what they want. Lol @ the lazy bastard too lol |
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11-26-2008, 10:49 AM
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| John Burnette War Room Member  Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: S.E. USA
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| Re: So proud - best copy I've ever written
Excellent report and timely for the truth to come out. Thanks, John |
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11-26-2008, 11:19 AM
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| Re: So proud - best copy I've ever written Quote:
Looking forward to what others have to say. Got some nice posts lined up on major niche blogs because of this. Rich | |
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11-26-2008, 11:35 AM
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| Who'm I kidding? War Room Member  Join Date: May 2006 Location: Easthampton, Massachusetts
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| Re: So proud - best copy I've ever written
I like the way it looks I think. I didn't like the invasive way the popover came up so fast - your squeeze page I mean. I'd recommend editing your book so it's more in the active voice - and use shorter words when possible - even if you have to use more. A lot of people can't read or use "inevitable" in a sentence. |
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