60 - 90 seconds of video need help

2nd run with current script

we've all heard about the power of twitter
and how effective it can be as a marketing tool

but the fact is, the majority of people who want to experience the power of twitter can not fully harness it.

WHY ?

for 1 simple reason

UNTARGETED FOLLOWERS

now what if i could show you something that can solve that problem ?

a powerful system that can help you target potential customers and clients who are interested in what you are offering


Introducing, Tweet Buddy!


The tool that will take your twitter marketing to a whole new level!


With tweet buddy you can target followers based location and keywords!

stop marketing on twitter with a shotgun and use a laser to focus in on your target market.

Tweet Buddy will increase sales and give you back what you need most... your time!

And guess what, the whole system completely automated!

So Tweet Buddy will be working for you even while you sleep! It doesn't get any easier.

any advice 3rd rewrite .... come on warriors help!!!


we've all heard about the power and popularity of twitter
and how effective it can be as a marketing tool

but the fact is, the majority of people who want to experience the power of twitter cannot fully harness it

WHY ?

for two simple reason

NOT ENOUGH TIME

and

UNTARGETED FOLLOWERS

now what if i could show you something that can solve both of those problems?

a powerful system that can help you not only target potential customers and clients who are interested in what you are offering, but save you the most precious commodity your time

Introducing, Tweet Buddy!

The tool that will take your twitter marketing to a whole new level!

With tweet buddy you can target followers based location and keywords and the system will do all the work

stop marketing on twitter with a shotgun and use a laser to focus in on your target market

Tweet Buddy will increase sales and give you back what you need most... your time!

And guess what, the whole system completely automated!

It's time you automate all those countless hours spent daily searching by keyword, following, unfollowing, sending Direct messages, sending out tweets,
interacting with your followers to build a rapport.

Tweet Buddy will be working for you even while you sleep!

It's only takes 10 minutes to set it up and then you can get back to focusing on your core business. It doesn't get any easier than this.

Tweet Buddy will help you gain 1000s of targeted followers and increase your sales beyond your wildest dreams.

I recommend you post this in the copywriting section (of the Warrior Forum).