What do Entrepreneurs wear? Need your advice!

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I'm doing a launch and I need some advice. What do you guys think about my sqeeuze page? Any advice? Anything I should add or take out?

And any Ideas on the shirt? What would you like on your shirt? I love wearing my "Future Millionaire" Shirt.

Thanks in advance,
Choson
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  • Profile picture of the author AndyCamden
    Hey bro. Here is my 2 cents. I think that is not a bad squeeze page and I would just do some of the following to make it even better:

    1. The video is no longer available.
    2. The title should have parentheses.

    "Watch Video Below And Learn How You can receive 15 FREE T-Shirts With Your Own Customized Design"

    3. The call to action could be a little stronger. It has to make people want to fill in their name and email address.

    You wrote:

    If you want to get 50% off the "Special Edition"
    Entrepreneur T-shirt or have an AMAZING idea
    for the T-shirt, then just enter your email address
    below:


    I would personally change it to:

    Hurry! Fill out the form below to INSTANTLY claim your 50% off coupon on the "Special Edition" Entrepreneurs T-Shirt!

    Hope that helps!
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    • Profile picture of the author rosetrees
      First you say I can get 15 for free (don't know how cos the video isn't working) then you tell me if I fill in my name and email I'll get 50% off. 50% off what? They're free - or perhaps they aren't.

      And you don't say which country you are in - as in how much will it cost me to have my t-shirt posted to where I live.

      I think if you are going to sell t-shirts you need something a lot more eye catching and artistic than a simple slogan which, let's face it, I could do at home with some iron on t-shirt transfers.

      Get creative man, get creative. I'm sure you can do it.
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      • Profile picture of the author Chris Cho
        Thank you so much for your help! I'll see what I can do.
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        • Profile picture of the author Mark Brock
          The changes you've made based on the suggestions here are simple yet make your site more effective!

          I think that a professionally designed site may be better for yourself and your promotion however as it will let your viewers know you are a serious businessman?!

          I know for a fact that I'd respond better to sites that at least give the impression of having being professionally designed.

          As far as the whole "you need eye-catching graphics on your tees" issue, I don't think you do.

          Just a good marketing and pricing strategy!

          Remember to scratch off the "Future" part of your tee when you reach that landmark as well!

          Mark
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          • Profile picture of the author Chris Cho
            I'm planning to make myself a "Current Millionaire" T-shirt before I turn 25. =)

            Thanks for your advice!
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            • Profile picture of the author Chris Cho
              BTW, I'm REALLY REALLY trying to launch the site to all the entrepreneurs. Specially trying to promote it to all the internet marketing entrepreneur... I'm not making any money on the first launch.

              After couple launch, I'm planning to have a STORE up where people can just click to buy. But at this moment I'm just trying to promote it all the entrepreneurs and have a shirt designed by us.
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