Redesigned My Headline and Learned a Thing or Two As Well
Here is what I'm going to stick with for the time being, and please look at the gradual improvement overtime for these various pitch page headlines:
First Shot:
http://www.20kleveling.com/images/newfront.jpg
Second Shot:
http://www.20kleveling.com/images/newfont2.jpg
Third Shot:
http://www.20kleveling.com/images/newfront2.jpg
Current One:
http://www.20kleveling.com/images/newfront3.jpg
Do you notice the difference between the first 3 and the final one?
In the final one, I'm focused solely on getting the reader's attention, not on selling the actual product itself. In all the others my focus is on trying to sell them immediately from the get go. The two lines below the main headline actually appear below the fold, so they are technically the start of the pitch itself.
Hopefully this kind of headline will increase sales, not that I was doing poorly but I would like to increase conversions by around 5%.
It took me a while to force myself to stop trying to sell the description of the product instead of the benefits of it. Learning to write compelling headlines are part of this process.
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