I Need Someone To Redo My Squeeze Pages

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Hi Warriors,

I have a squeeze page at $7 Trial Subscription to Paul Hartunian's Million Dollar Publicity Letter

I want to direct AdWords traffic to that page, but as it stands now, that page won't get a very high quality score.

I'm looking for someone with experience to redo that page to ideally get me a 10/10 quality score.

If redoing that page works out there will be many others to do.

Any recommendations on someone to do the job?

Thanks.
#pages #redo #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author nick1123
    Hi Paul

    I cannot really recommend anyone but there are many people here will that will give you advice for free.

    A few thoughts on your page:

    Do you offer a money back guarantee?

    Does you product have any graphics ie ecover or money back guarantee images?

    Do you have any testimonials?

    Do you have any examples of people/sites this has worked for?

    The top 2 chunks of text are all the same bolded size. Try varying this a good headline, maybe in red.

    Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author Marian Berghes
    Try putting some graphic in, at least a small header.

    Those 2 chunks of text need to be redone. Play with colors abit...and I also recommend a smaller font size for the second text.

    Try to put that opt-in box on the right side of the page, and next to it on the right just put 4-5 benefits with a short description each.

    Testimonials would also be a good addition, around 3-4 should be enough.

    If you could I would strongly recommend a small video...it can do wonders. A short 2-3 min video just explaining the benefits of your service would be enough.
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  • Profile picture of the author kumcheong
    hi paul, i am interested but how much would your budget be?

    sorry for asking this...
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisByrns
    Paul, shoot me a PM. My squeeze pages WORK.



    Don't worry 'bout the price, i'm sure we can work something out.

    Cheers.
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    • Profile picture of the author Nightengale
      Paul has a bazillion testimonials. No need to worry on that score.

      I've seen his sales package -- when it was still a paper and ink sales letter and a VHS video. (Gasp!)

      Michelle

      P.S. Paul, would you please look at my post (#2169) on this page and elaborate on it for everybody? I gave a very brief publicity opportunity scenario for selling online services to offline businesses, but you could give others more ideas.

      http://www.warriorforum.com/main-int...s-free-44.html
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  • Profile picture of the author pavondunbar
    If you're good at using Photoshop...

    Go that route!

    Photoshop works wonders for web design...

    I'm OK at at...

    A beginner...no...

    But not an expert either...

    But I would recommend using it...

    Also Marian Berges knows what he is talking about...

    Hope this helps and best of luck...

    Pavon
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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Bogowski
    Be aware that you quality score will depend on your ad and CTR just as much as it will depend on page content
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  • Profile picture of the author Paul Hartunian
    Thanks for the input. I appreciate it.

    Seems to me that there are several components - AdWords ad copy, CTR and squeeze page design & copy. I think I've got my ad copy down. I'll be testing a number of versions again each other.

    It's the squeeze page I'm focusing on. I can write fairly compelling copy. The actual sales page behind the squeeze page is fine. So I'm not all that worried about the copy on the squeeze page converting. I'm more concerned about the Google Quality Score getting as high as possible - a 10/10 ideally.

    That's where I'm a bit stuck. I'm not sure what's needed to get that score on the squeeze page aside from keyword rich copy.
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  • Profile picture of the author Paul Hartunian
    Michelle,

    I read your posting on the thread you mentioned. You gave some excellent advice. Do you want me to put my input on this thread or that one? I'm astonished at how many replies there are to the other thread.

    Paul
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    • Profile picture of the author Nightengale
      Put it in that thread. A huge number of Warriors are following it. You can quote my post to remind them if you like... Whatever works.

      I think this thread will have a short shelf life and most won't see it. The other thread though... It just keeps going...and going...and going.... Your comments will be seen there. I'm not sure how many Warriors understand the value of publicity and how easy it will be to get for that business model. I just wrote that off the top of my head so it was pretty brief. No how-to details or anything. You'll have more ideas/angles.

      You can pitch your publicity kit and I'll give you a testimonial for it for the Warriors reading that thread.

      Thanks,
      Michelle



      Originally Posted by Paul Hartunian View Post

      Michelle,

      I read your posting on the thread you mentioned. You gave some excellent advice. Do you want me to put my input on this thread or that one? I'm astonished at how many replies there are to the other thread.

      Paul
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  • Profile picture of the author e-mail2u
    Paul,

    Had a little play with the headline made it more eye catching...

    $7 Trial Subscription to Paul Hartunian's Million Dollar Publicity Letter

    Let me know what you think,
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  • Profile picture of the author Paul Hartunian
    Hey Geoff,

    Your additions look great. I sent you a PM.

    Michelle, I might add to the other thread but also start a new topic on the importance of making yourself a celebrity. Seems like most people simply try to make money following other people's strategies, etc. But, as you mention, making yourself a celebrity will blow all the other strategies away.

    Thanks for the input.

    Paul
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  • Profile picture of the author Trieu
    Originally Posted by Paul Hartunian View Post

    Hi Warriors,

    I have a squeeze page at $7 Trial Subscription to Paul Hartunian's Million Dollar Publicity Letter

    I want to direct AdWords traffic to that page, but as it stands now, that page won't get a very high quality score.

    I'm looking for someone with experience to redo that page to ideally get me a 10/10 quality score.

    If redoing that page works out there will be many others to do.

    Any recommendations on someone to do the job?

    Thanks.
    Hi, do you still remember who you purchased the squeeze page template from? I remember seeing it in a wso section somewhere, but cant seem to find it.

    thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author dreamtab
    Hey!

    If you are concerned about Google Quality Score then you may need to add few links at the bottom. Try to input disclaimer link, terms, support, blog or any other link. Google may disapprove your PPC if they do not see any link on your page.

    Hope that helps!
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    • Profile picture of the author Mike Bogowski
      This is good advice.

      At the very least you need a privacy policy. The problem with your squeeze page now is that there is nowhere to go, they can tell its nothing but a squeeze page.

      Link out at the bottom to a few administrative links, add a link to one of your content sites and link to a page of articles on the root domain.

      Originally Posted by dreamtab View Post

      Hey!

      If you are concerned about Google Quality Score then you may need to add few links at the bottom. Try to input disclaimer link, terms, support, blog or any other link. Google may disapprove your PPC if they do not see any link on your page.

      Hope that helps!
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  • Profile picture of the author John Willer
    Google wants the keyword to be highly relevant to the ad... which should be highly relevant to the squeeze page. If they are then you will get the highest ranking.

    You will probably need multiple squeeze pages to match the keywords (for highest relevancy) plus the broad keywords will never get a high enough CTR to give top value
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