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Is my about me page to offensive

by nicholasb
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I just wrote my about me page and all though I was truly speaking from my heart, I just want to be sure I'm not being a little to honest and to the point. Especially at the end.

Just looking for some honest advice from some fellow warriors.

This is me and how I feel do you think others will resonate with me or cast me out.

About ME | ProfitWithNickB.com
#offensive #page
  • Profile picture of the author sevenish
    It's a tad morbid, in my opinion. I'd rather leave your page feeling excited about me and my potential as well as about you and your products, not depressed about our universal, impending mortality.

    That said, it did come across as sincere--which I think goes a long way.
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    • Profile picture of the author nicholasb
      Originally Posted by sevenish View Post

      It's a tad morbid, in my opinion. I'd rather leave your page feeling excited about me and my potential as well as about you and your products, not depressed about our universal, impending mortality.

      That said, it did come across as sincere--which I think goes a long way.
      But do you think it will help people follow their dreams, or wallow in their pity even more.
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  • Profile picture of the author write-stuff
    I didn't see anything offensive in it. Couple of spelling fixes:

    "alot" = "a lot"
    and "to" = "too" in about the 3rd or 4th paragraph.

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