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What do you think of this site?

by Anthony K
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Hey warriors Ive finished developing 10 sites now and this is an example of one of them www.temperaturegun.net | Temperature Gun . what do you think of it? I dont have any links so far but I think its time to start adding them and bookmarking/backlinks? What do you guys think?
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  • Profile picture of the author GeorgR.
    Good! but "buy now" button should be above the fold!
    (I would integrate the "buy now" button into the image and put link into the image)
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    • Profile picture of the author SEOexpertSEO
      In my opinion the banner in the header should be all on the same line.
      The links at the bottom of the page are hidden (same color as background) that is a big no-no.

      I would recommend having the side-bar with an outline of a different background.. It's hard to read your copy the way you a have it configured right now.
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      • Profile picture of the author Anthony K
        mm how do I change the color of the footer text?
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  • Profile picture of the author LMC
    Anthony,

    Looking good my man, sorry I missed your message. I think it's time to take them to the next level.

    You have to fix your Optimization on your pages, title tags and such.

    Regardless, I'll send you an email tomorrow
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    • Profile picture of the author Richnana
      I learn something new everyday - A temperature gun? liked the layout of the site. The orange color wakes me up/ Good luck with your promotion.
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      • Profile picture of the author LikeBids
        Are you allowed to post your own site and ask members to give their feedback? Does anyone know if this goes against the rules of this forum and if that's self-promotion?

        Thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ian Varnava
    I like it Anthony. You're ranking 200 something for your main keyword already, so with back-linking you should climb up quickly, and make some $$!

    Your footer links are almost the same color as your background, I would change those to be more visible.
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  • Profile picture of the author skwurl
    your site looks really good!
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  • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
    I tend to like the site layout as well as it being concentrated on one subject.

    Here are a couple of thoughts off the top of my head:

    I think you need to define what a temperature gun is. From the copy, I would gather this site is for people that already know what a temperature gun is and how it is used. (Yes, I saw the paragraphs on the left.) A couple of instant questions that came to mind is how far away can you measure the temperature. The word "non-contact temperature measurement" or similar might be useful in your description.

    It might also be helpful to add some additional description besides "Need a Temperature Gun for the kitchen or the garage?"

    And the last sentence "We offer great discounts and amazing shipping options than the majority of anyone else." isn't quite right from a grammar point of view ... we offer this ... than ...???

    As Ian pointed out, your footer text is the same as the footer background text ... not a good idea.

    I kept looking for a call to action, finally moved my mouse over the pictures, and gathered this is your call to action. You need to make that a *lot* clearer.

    You might test out different text colors on your menu ... it doesn't have enough contrast for my tastes as it is just a tad hard to see.

    You don't have any trust symbols on your site. That might make it a bit difficult to get online sales. Adding a physical address and a telephone number would help. And some testimonies from people who bought would be helpful (yes, I realize it is a new site.)

    Hope this helps.

    Marvin
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