Looking for opinions on "newsletter page"

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I'm looking for any input, good or bad, on this page.

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  • Profile picture of the author Mrmuscle90
    I think it gets the message across and explains what you are doing well, did notice you like saying email alot though lol
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    • Profile picture of the author doorkicker13
      Originally Posted by Mrmuscle90 View Post

      I think it gets the message across and explains what you are doing well, did notice you like saying email alot though lol
      I just noticed that after reading it again. It's like I get in the groove and don't realize it.
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  • Profile picture of the author DanielleLynnCopy
    Hi there Doorkicker,

    It's clean - but I wouldn't put the title as "Newsletter" - "Resistance Band Newsletter" would be better.

    If this is a way to get people to sign up, I don't think it will have a high opt-in rate - it's lacking visually. You need to have some key bullet points - not a mash of text.

    Take a look at several successful opt-in pages (clickbank has several)

    But you're on the right track!
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    • Profile picture of the author doorkicker13
      Originally Posted by DanielleLynnCopy View Post

      Hi there Doorkicker,

      It's clean - but I wouldn't put the title as "Newsletter" - "Resistance Band Newsletter" would be better.

      If this is a way to get people to sign up, I don't think it will have a high opt-in rate - it's lacking visually. You need to have some key bullet points - not a mash of text.

      Take a look at several successful opt-in pages (clickbank has several)

      But you're on the right track!
      Thanks for the input!
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  • Profile picture of the author contaai
    I think it looks good. Nice and clean layout.
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