Tare my website apart let me no what you think

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Hey,

Well right now i am in the process of fixing some things on my home page with the alignment and making everything clearer.

But i figured i might as well ask you guys for your opinions and what you think i should change.

Website: Untitled Document

Thanks in advance

Eric

P.s. I am still looking for some newbie products to promote if you have one hit me up with a pm and explain how it helps newbies.
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  • Profile picture of the author Eric Stanley
    Originally Posted by cires123 View Post

    Hey,

    Website: Untitled Document

    Hey Eric,

    First change -- the title!

    - Eric
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  • Profile picture of the author Tim Russ
    Two of your graphics are pointing to your oldwebsite and are only showing place holders.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tim Russ
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    Wow, I didn't know Allen was certifying newbie starter products. How can I get some of my newbie products certified?
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  • Profile picture of the author Candace Gill
    I would remove the left side bar, and only have the content area and the right side bar. Other than that it looks wonderful.
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      • Profile picture of the author Lance K
        Originally Posted by cires123 View Post

        Ha
        I'm pretty sure Tim's comments were tongue-in-cheek more than a pat on the back for "creativity".
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    • Profile picture of the author jan roos
      Originally Posted by Candace Gill View Post

      I would remove the left side bar, and only have the content area and the right side bar. Other than that it looks wonderful.
      Thats what I was about to say.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan Ambrose
    It does look promising but it all looks a bit cramped on my screen. The tables in the middle content are too close to the sidebars in my opinion.

    Also the text on the right column needs some margin spacing.

    Can I suggest you move this thread to the copywriting forum, you're more likely to get better responses as posting this kind of thread in this general forum can sometimes come across as a marketing ploy.

    If you want honest answers from expert copywriters head further down the forum to the copywriters area

    Daniel
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan Ambrose
    One other thing... I thought you might like to know that you spelt some words wrong in your title of this thread:

    Tare my website apart let me no what you think

    should become

    Tear my website apart, let me know what you think.

    Daniel
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  • Profile picture of the author Allen Graves
    There are misspelled words on the website too.
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    • Profile picture of the author bombdiggity
      The testimonials seem way too squeezed together to me, and they're pretty hard on the eyes.
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  • Profile picture of the author valerieSONORA
    LOL any testimonials from Vegas Vince will make you laugh haha I just have to laugh when he says wagon man LOL. If/When I launch anything, I'm heading straight to VV.
    Sorry I can't be of much help. It looks Ok from my viewpoint but I'm good at finding those little things to make it better.
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    • Profile picture of the author Eric Land
      thanks for the tips everyone im going to really get to work now!

      Eric
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