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Just starting out need all the help I can get

by Gantstar
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Hi all ,

i have started my first little venture after putting off for so long . Wonder if you could review my site and let me know where I could Improve. I have pretty much done all of it myself and would really appreciate feedback .

Thanks so much
#iphone site #review design #review site #starting
  • Profile picture of the author Cool Hand Luke
    Originally Posted by Gantstar View Post

    Hi all ,

    i have started my first little venture after putting off for so long . Wonder if you could review my site and let me know where I could Improve. I have pretty much done all of it myself and would really appreciate feedback .

    Thanks so much
    So you want us to review your site but won't say where or what the site is or provide any link?

    Just a guess, but you won't find much help that way.
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  • Profile picture of the author Gantstar
    Sorry forgot to add the site in howcreateiphoneapp.com
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  • Profile picture of the author LiemNguyen
    Uhmmm...this is a good way to get free traffic, maybe i should post my site here too...
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel_James_Warburton
    You need to sort out the justification of the text at the top.

    I think a video at the top of your page would do absolute wonders. Try making a promotional video with some good music in the background. It keeps people on your site.

    Maybe include a facebook like button?

    Looks good though
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    • Profile picture of the author Gantstar
      Thanks for the feedback will definitely do those would you buy the service
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    • Profile picture of the author Gantstar
      Originally Posted by Daniel_James_Warburton View Post

      You need to sort out the justification of the text at the top.

      I think a video at the top of your page would do absolute wonders. Try making a promotional video with some good music in the background. It keeps people on your site.

      Maybe include a facebook like button?

      Looks good though

      Thanks for the feedback would you buy the service
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      • Profile picture of the author TPFLegionaire
        Originally Posted by Gantstar View Post

        Thanks for the feedback would you buy the service

        -Not yet...Need Testimonials , example of apps built by your team and commissioned by your clients are needed.

        Speaking of testimonials. I don't trust the ones you have there:
        72 HOUR REPORT

        -Do you provide/sign an nda or non compete agreement prior to reviewing apps sent to you for evaluation?


        -Spotted typos and grammar error in a few places, you should hire someone to edit the site.

        -With no phone numbers, addresses and with privacy on your domain
        I would not be willing to do business with you.
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        • Profile picture of the author ezpay4me
          well if I were you I would definitely hype up the page a bit. I know that it is somewhat unethical to exaggerate the service/product but it will definitely drive in more conversions, just a though, look at how huge Super affiliates cash in through CB.
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        • Profile picture of the author Gantstar
          Originally Posted by Gantstar View Post

          Hi all ,

          i have started my first little venture after putting off for so long . Wonder if you could review my site and let me know where I could Improve. I have pretty much done all of it myself and would really appreciate feedback .

          Thanks so much
          Originally Posted by TPFLegionaire View Post

          -Not yet...Need Testimonials , example of apps built by your team and commissioned by your clients are needed.

          Speaking of testimonials. I don't trust the ones you have there:
          72 HOUR REPORT[/url]

          -Do you provide/sign an nda or non compete agreement prior to reviewing apps sent to you for evaluation?


          -Spotted typos and grammar error in a few places, you should hire someone to edit the site.

          -With no phone numbers, addresses and with privacy on your domain
          I would not be willing to do business with you.
          Thanks for the feedback really appreciate it . Will update with all the information ...I was trying to get it done really quick done the whole site in a couple of days.
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel_James_Warburton
    If I'm being honest, no I probably wouldn't.

    I don't own an Iphone for one thing & Apps do not interest me.

    As for your target audience? ermmm... maybe?

    I think you should follow this advice:

    "Give people what they need for free, and Give people what they want for a price"

    Make sure you describe all the information that they need to know for free, this makes the site popular. Then offer them a service they would really really want for a price.

    Enjoy!
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  • Profile picture of the author sjetton
    Definitely fix the text spacing at the top of the site...iPhone apps need to appear "friendly"....so should the site. First impressions matter...
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