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I just want 20 seconds of your time

by kswr123
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Dear fellow Warriors,

This is my busiest week as I get ready for my product launch. Please take 20 seconds to read:

My product is called the Recession Handbook 101, and it is about how to deal with the recession, what it is etc. It is about 25 pages long. I was wondering If you could just click on the little image at the bottom of this post to enlarge an image of my Header. Do you like it? Please respond, as I'm doing this whole pocess myself and it makes it a lot easier when I get feedback.


Also If anyone would like to review my eBook please ask!

Thanks
Mubarak Waseem
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  • Profile picture of the author Jim Burney
    Originally Posted by saq3m View Post

    Dear fellow Warriors,

    This is my busiest week as I get ready for my product launch. Please take 20 seconds to read:

    My product is called the Recession Handbook 101, and it is about how to deal with the recession, what it is etc. It is about 25 pages long. I was wondering If you could just click on the little image at the bottom of this post to enlarge an image of my Header. Do you like it? Please respond, as I'm doing this whole pocess myself and it makes it a lot easier when I get feedback.


    Also If anyone would like to review my eBook please ask!

    Thanks
    Mubarak Waseem
    Nice header Mubarak.

    Colors may be not to everybodies liking.

    I'll review ebook for you if required.

    Best

    Jim
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    • Profile picture of the author kswr123
      Thanks Jim. The first, second, 3rd and 4th parts are attatched.

      Thanks so much for agreeing to review this.
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  • Profile picture of the author Barry Davis
    I like the basic design, but the colors are a little "loud" for my taste.

    Barry
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  • Profile picture of the author Meanna Blog
    How about something like this...
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  • Profile picture of the author Caroline Middlebrook
    I don't know. There is something about the fonts/colours that somehow doesn't seem to fit with the subject of the book. It's a nice design but just doesn't quite feel right.

    Caroline
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan Ambrose
    The book looks a bit out of shape. I preferred your first attempt, but like the others - the color was a bit bold for me.

    Saying that however it is being looked at with a black background.. so if you had on your site a white background, it might tone it down a bit.
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    • Profile picture of the author kswr123
      wow. Thanks for all of the input guys!

      Any1 reviewed my product?
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  • Profile picture of the author RRicart
    I also like the design - I would probably go with another color on the font and even change the style of the font so that its easier to read.......
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    • Profile picture of the author kswr123
      ok thanks. Ill upload an easier-on-the-eyes design.

      Also, I know this is the wrong place, but does anyone have a list that I could use to help promote my product?
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  • Profile picture of the author Christie Love
    Yes, I'd say that the comments are consistent. The colors need to be toned down a bit. Streamline the fonts and choose a different cover for the e-book. You want a cover that will make the book look like it has more substance with a thicker looking cover.

    I hope this helps!
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  • Profile picture of the author sunnyman
    The 2nd sure looks better than the 1st, which was very confusing and hard to read. I think you should put less emphasis on that graphic and more attention on what follows - your headlines. Some gurus say you shouldn't even have a header graphic.
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    • Profile picture of the author kswr123
      thanks. This is my first product, so I hope that it all goes well. Just a quick question:

      How can I sign up affiliates to my website.

      Basically, my first sales will come from other Warriors' lists. I want to give them a 50% commission on all of the sales that arise, but as yet I have no way of knowing who gave me which buyer any help?
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