Criticism needed for my website

Looks fine to me. Its a Minecraft informational site plain and simple and you did a good job. I don't see the need for a sales copy so you are good to go from my perspective

Bernard St-Pierre

First question: Is this to make money, or strictly for fun?

The only thing that concerns me if , Why oh why do you have a Forum?

You wanted honest? Too much empty space and overall, boring.

Oh okay, and do you not think a forum is a good idea? Thanks alcymart.
Marhelper: Well i suppose you will only find it interesting if you actually play the game
And this website is mostly fun but i would like to make some money

Well what do you suggest i do with that space then?

Okay i shall decide which spaces in my site need filling and i shall fill them

its pretty easy to design websites with weebly..........its looking nice....

Overall, I think that the site is pretty decent, especially since you used Weebly to make it. Other people mentioned monetizing it more, and if that's your goal, then I'd pick a few of the options and implement them on the site.

Since you asked for some criticisms, I'll just mention a few things that I thought could be tweaked a little. To me, the layout of the Home page is slightly bland, and if someone stumbles across your site trying to find out what Minecraft is, they'd have to scroll all the way down through the Recent Updates, News, and Tip of the Day section to find out more about the basics of the game.

I also thought it was a bit strange how you said, "There is no actual objective to minecraft," since the point of the game is to engage in construction within the game's world. Maybe you could reword that section to make it a bit clearer to newbies?

A pet peeve of mine is that there are several instances where you used apostrophes incorrectly, like in the "Video's" link, and the "Submit your video" page. (Should be written as "videos" instead.) There are a few other grammatical errors as well, like not capitalizing the word "I," a lot of the time, etc., but they are minor issues for the most part.

A few things that I really liked:

-The "Minecraft News" page and "Tips and Tricks" page seem very thorough; fans of the game would probably appreciate that.
-I think it's nice how you included pictures on the "Seeds" page. They provide nice visual aids and add a bit of color.
-Encouraging users to submit videos and seeds is a good touch, and adds another dimension to the site.

Good luck with your site; it seems like you're off to a good start.

Surely, I will do and will come back to you.

it loads very slow,any idea why?
this is not so good for ranking on Google.

It doesnt load slow for me?
and whats not so good for ranking in google? Do you mean like the topic of the site or the way it loaded slow?

Oh i see, but it loads fine for me?
What about you Simply?

By that, you mean you want better content at the home page?
Or do you mean pictures?

I suppose nothing GRABBED me visually to make me want to read the content...

It doesn't load at all for me. Says site not found...

I am not sure if a picture would fit well though, i shall think of a nice design to draw people in as the main problem with my site seems to be the homepage, and i dont know why it doesnt seem to be loading for a minority?

Looks pretty good, I instantly knew what your site was about when I landed and thats half the battle.

thanks wealthyclark! I admit i do need to do some work on the home page, but i need to think of something attractive and of good quality to put there.. any suggestions?

I have added a new scrolling text banner underneath the welcome part of the site, this displays the latest news, but at the moment i only have one sentence worth of information as for some reason its not spacing out, how can i do this? But feedback on this scrolling banner would be nice

yes, thats what it is and oh, it looks alright i suppose but its not the best, Im trying my hardest to sort the home page out but i am still clueless on what to put there, with you being a Minecraft player what do you suggest, what would you want to read? aswell as drawing you in with a picture?

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