Opt-in Page, How good is this?

by Jaxi

Posted: 13 years ago 13 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Squezzepage3

Thats my new opt-in page right there, i made it in photoshop and coded it in dreamweaver, havent placed my opt-in form on the page yet. What do you think? will it generate any leads? is the copy good? and how is the layout? this is my first opt-in page EVER, havent done this kind of marketing before. And the reason i havent placed my aweber code on the page yet, is that i wanted to hear if you guys think its good enough!

#good #optin #page

patrickz 13 years ago

Looks good to me. Lead capture forms are always a great idea.
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boldguy 13 years ago

Looking koool...will yield a rewarding business in future.
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- Resale Rights Ninja 13 years ago
  
  Well this might be a little obvious but your bullet point image is missing.
  
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Josh Richardson 13 years ago

Looks good, very clean. The only real way to test it is to send some traffic towards it and look at your conversion rate though. So go ahead, put that code in, generate some targetted traffic, then judge

Good luck!
Josh
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Jamie Drew 13 years ago

Looks sweet! Professional too! Is that a video box in the top right? Maybe you could split test it with and without a video!?

Nice all the same! Well done!

Jamie D
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rlhurst 13 years ago

Originally Posted by Jaxi

Squezzepage3

What do you think? will it generate any leads? is the copy good? and how is the layout?

Under "Once you get my free gift you'll be able to.." at point #2, "hiden" should have another "d"... (hidden)

Also, I'm using Firefox, and the last part of point #2, and #4 are lost behind the images.
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- Ross Kenny 13 years ago
  
  Sorry to be blunt but I don't think this will convert very well.
  
  You need to state the main benefit in the headline and the font
  size doesn't seem large enough. Nothing stands out and grabs
  my attention.
  
  The images are of crap ebooks
  
  You don't need images on a squeeze page. Just some good copy.
  
  Check this out for ideas - Opt-in Page (2 Columns) - Mahnoor Khan
  
  Another site that may help - How To Make A Squeeze Page - Build Lead-Sucking Squeeze Pages In Minutes!
  
  Good luck
  
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Jaxi 13 years ago

ok, thanks for all your advices and stuff. I really appreciate all of your help!
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Ben Gordon 13 years ago

You should make it a bit more fancier. For example; instead of making the squares, use check marks. It will look much more sleek. I'm sure you understand my concept.

Regards,
Ben
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Jarrett Banned 13 years ago

Here's some ideas...

#1 -
"This free offer could be pulled down at any time. So you really must take action now,
or it might be gone forever!"

I might simply try saying.. Hurry! This is a Limited Time Offer and Will Not Last!

#2 - Headline -
Get rid of the shadow behind the text.. not doing ya any favors.. it makes it harder to read.

Also.. instead of trying to give people 100 different garbage plr stuff.. focus on 1 single benefit...

for example.. a headline like "Discover a Sneaky Little Trick to Get 5,302 Raving Twitter Followers in Just Weeks" speaks alot more then all of that.

I'd also use a bigger font for the headline.. and consider IMPACT font..

#3. Your Benefits
Your benefits are vague/weak..

'Access Lots Of Exclusive FREE Marketing Tools.' - What are these marketing tools going to do for me?

a better benefit would be.. Get FREE access to a killer little plugin that'll increase your optin rate by 300%!

"Get To Know Some Of The Biggest And Most Well Hiden Secrets In Internet Marketing."
Vague.

why not something like.. Uncover the top secret formula that Jeff Johnson used to spit out $302,514 from 1 ugly email...

anyways.. hopefully that gives ya some ideas

I did a whole video course on how to do bad ass opt in pages..
It's free. watch it here ;p

YouTube - ‪Squeeze Page Secrets - #1 -...

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- Ross Kenny 13 years ago
  
  Exactly right Jarett
  
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Joe Giannetti 13 years ago

This free offer could be pulled down at any time. So you really must take action now,
or it might be gone forever!

This needs to be in bigger print and highlighted. they need to see this.
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travlinguy 13 years ago

Ross is right. There are no benefits, just a bunch of stuff. Though, 37 List Building Secrets is an excellent book. But that's not the point.

Another thing that's missing is what's in it for you. You need to tell your subscribers what you're up to, why you want their names. Obviously, you want to build your list but what kind of business are you running?

What else can you offer other than dated ebooks? Sure, the page presents pretty well, but as for the content there, it needs to be developed more. One more thing, put a comma after the word "tools" in your headline. Without it the message stalls and is confusing. Good luck.
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