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Website Reviewing

by Oakland Direct
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Evening all,

I am fairly new to this site and would welcome some of the more seasoned members opinions/ views on my website that i have put together.

I am not allowed to post website but if anyone would be kind enough to message me ill return the address

I am open to any suggesions /tips or techniques to make it better or more user friendly

Many thanks

alasdair
#reviewing #website
  • Profile picture of the author Oakland Direct
    any help much appreciated

    thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert M Gouge
    Looks good so far.

    I'd recommend shortening your opt-in form. Unless you're doing local business or snail mail advertising, you don't really need their physical address. For email marketing purposes you really only need their name and email address.

    I imagine asking for all that information, as you have it now, can drastically reduce opt-ins.
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  • Profile picture of the author williamrs
    Try to post the url like this [www] [google] [com] or something similar.

    You won't be able to reply to PMs, so I think this is your best bet.


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  • Profile picture of the author Oakland Direct
    (www) (working-from-homeuk).(co).(uk)
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  • Profile picture of the author jgant
    Write some unique posts about starting a home business. It's a topic beyond MMO. Many people are looking to create many different businesses at home. Write about those - cleaning, counselling, law firms, personal training, catering, dog grooming/walking ... think about the offline world. It's a huge market and gives you a chance to distinguish your blog.

    Otherwise, I like the look of it. Now just write great content.

    Oh yeah - really break down your content. If you write about starting a dog walking company - write a series. You can certainly incorporate online marketing in the process, but be sure to write about all elements of starting the business. Be sure to do some keyword research so you get the traffic.
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisMcDonald
    Originally Posted by Oakland Direct View Post

    Evening all,

    I am fairly new to this site and would welcome some of the more seasoned members opinions/ views on my website that i have put together.

    I am not allowed to post website but if anyone would be kind enough to message me ill return the address

    I am open to any suggesions /tips or techniques to make it better or more user friendly

    Many thanks

    alasdair
    Morning

    Your site is easy on the eye, I like that. Makes it a lot easier to read.

    However, what makes it harder to read are some basic spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. I read through your first post and found a handful pretty quickly. I could review your whole site for you and provide a report on it, for what I consider a very small fee!

    Let me know if you're interested, I can provide a fellow warrior's feedback.

    Chris
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    • Profile picture of the author Oakland Direct
      Thanks you all for you your advise..

      I would interested in speaking with someone who could optimise keywords for the blog to help increase website rannkings

      thanks again
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