Resource Box - Which Is Better

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I am having some people's getting people to click on the link in my resource box and I believe it has got to do with the way the resource box is written.. How do you think I should go about it. Belo are some I have tried.

Losing for six pack abs? Visit ( my weight loss site ) and find out more about how to get six pack abs in a short time. ( converts at about 11%)

Do You want to Lose Weight? Are trying to get rid of some pounds and keep it off ? If yes Visit (my weight loss site ) To read more weight loss tips ( 25% conversion for some articles but as bad as 7% for some).

Do you have any suggestion.
#box #resource
  • Profile picture of the author ryanman
    I would say add a stronger call to action.
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    • Profile picture of the author yommys01
      Originally Posted by ryanman View Post

      I would say add a stronger call to action.
      I just thought of something like : Do You want to Lose Weight? Are trying to get rid of some pounds and keep it off ? If yes Visit [ My weight loss site ]recieve a free weight loss report worth $267 - all for free.
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  • Profile picture of the author TheRichJerksNet
    I would say stop posting your link over and over .. It's called self promotion..

    James
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    • Profile picture of the author yommys01
      Originally Posted by TheRichJerksNet View Post

      I would say stop posting your link over and over .. It's called self promotion..

      James
      I am not trying to post my links in any way. Besides that site has got nothing to do with IM products. Not many warriors want to lose weight but I am going to remove the links anyway.
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  • Profile picture of the author yommys01
    any other person got some tips? I need help!!!
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    • Profile picture of the author Richniche
      Originally Posted by yommys01 View Post

      any other person got some tips? I need help!!!
      As long as it's telling the whole story and striking the readers, it's effective.

      How about this - We burn fats faster than you run. So check (your site link) before you walk away.
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  • Profile picture of the author billromer
    "Six-Pack Abs In Just 6 Minutes Per Day - Free Report/Email Course Reveals Controversial New Techniques That Get Amazing Results - [link]"

    "Visit [link] To Instantly Download A Free, 24-Page Report - Six-Pack Abs In Six Minutes A Day"

    "Lose Your Belly Fat Fast - Visit [link] To Get Immediate Access To A Powerful, 24-Page Free Report."

    Just some ideas - more benefits, more action, more emotion.

    Bill
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  • Profile picture of the author yommys01
    Thanks Bill.. warriors I need more help!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author tess47
    You CAN get rock-hard abs fast! Don't wait a minute longer - the sooner you start, the sooner you will have those six pack abs you desire.

    Just an idea
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  • Profile picture of the author biz_online
    I agree with Bill... But I would also add, doing some research on your keywords and use your keyword as your anchor text! Cheers!
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  • Profile picture of the author James A. Miller
    I don't like any of the examples here :-)

    You might want to see Jeff Herring's stuff on article writing, marketing and his resource box secrets or at least his articles on EZA.

    The idea is not to have any sort of conclusion to your article. End it abruptly and the resource box should begin with something like "And now I'd like to invite you..." Your name should be at the very bottom of the resource box. This way readers won't filter out your advertising message.
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  • Profile picture of the author yommys01
    I can't seem to find Jeff Herring's articles for some reasons.
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  • Profile picture of the author yommys01
    I can now see his articles it was due to wrongh spelling
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