New 3-Way Massive Traffic Video...

Jorge Sampson · 12-30-2008, 09:51 PM

Hey Warriors,

Would you care to critique my latest Video?

Here's the link:

http://www.3WayMassiveTraffic.com/video1/

Thanks in advance for your feedback

Cheers,

- Jorge Sampson

CurtisN · 12-30-2008, 10:25 PM

Hi Jorge,

I watched your video and I only have one thing to critique. I really liked what you were saying, but not how you were saying it. You were reading a script and it sounded like it too. Perhaps a more casual and natural tone would be more effective.

That's it from me, good luck on your launch!

Curtis

Jorge Sampson · 12-30-2008, 10:33 PM

Hi Curtis,

Thanks for the feedback!

- Jorge Sampson

12-30-2008, 09:51 PM	#1
Jorge Sampson Banned War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 1,541 Thanks: 7 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	New 3-Way Massive Traffic Video... Hey Warriors, Would you care to critique my latest Video? Here's the link: http://www.3WayMassiveTraffic.com/video1/ Thanks in advance for your feedback Cheers, - Jorge Sampson

12-30-2008, 10:25 PM	#2
CurtisN Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Toronto, Canada. Posts: 1,300 Thanks: 143 Thanked 231 Times in 187 Posts	Re: New 3-Way Massive Traffic Video... Hi Jorge, I watched your video and I only have one thing to critique. I really liked what you were saying, but not how you were saying it. You were reading a script and it sounded like it too. Perhaps a more casual and natural tone would be more effective. That's it from me, good luck on your launch! Curtis

12-30-2008, 10:33 PM	#3
Jorge Sampson Banned War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 1,541 Thanks: 7 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	Re: New 3-Way Massive Traffic Video... Hi Curtis, Thanks for the feedback! - Jorge Sampson