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New Site Review, built to make money :)

by Union
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Hi guys, here i want to ask you, if somebody want can can help me, Go to my signature and open my site, take a look please, and give me your feedback about.
:confused::confused::confused:WAIT !!! Please dont think that im trying to have FREE TRAFFIC this way I just need some review, And Everybody who gonna give me a review, i will follow to your site too, So please dont understand me wrong. The thing is, i have another site, and i want to see what people are thinking about this one, and to make sure ill do better the second one and make some changes for this from my signature.

Please look at full page, youll see Amazon there, what do u think about place? Adsense? and style ?


Thank you very very much
#built #make #money #review #site
  • Profile picture of the author RyanJohnson
    well for starters, your site title is "Weight Loss Tips For Us" and that image slider has a bunch of pictures completely unrelated to weight loss. I saw a mountain, a bear, etc... nothing about weight loss. I didn't even read the content.
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    • Profile picture of the author LloydC
      Originally Posted by RyanJohnson View Post

      well for starters, your site title is "Weight Loss Tips For Us" and that image slider has a bunch of pictures completely unrelated to weight loss. I saw a mountain, a bear, etc... nothing about weight loss. I didn't even read the content.
      Be thankful you didnt, not to sound harsh but I'd get a native speaker to proof-read and correct your content, you can find them on fiverr for next to nothing.
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      • Profile picture of the author Union
        Originally Posted by LloydC View Post

        Be thankful you didnt, not to sound harsh but I'd get a native speaker to proof-read and correct your content, you can find them on fiverr for next to nothing.

        Thx this sites, like other are on writers content, the guy are from India, so will do later we will resolve with the content correction... for now i need to know about design, to see how can i make it better....
        Thx
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    • Profile picture of the author Union
      Originally Posted by RyanJohnson View Post

      well for starters, your site title is "Weight Loss Tips For Us" and that image slider has a bunch of pictures completely unrelated to weight loss. I saw a mountain, a bear, etc... nothing about weight loss. I didn't even read the content.

      Yeap, i agree 100%, will be changed soon, im waiting for custom pictures to upload them.
      thx
      sign up to your :Free eBook For Affiliates!
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  • Profile picture of the author SeanLee
    Hey!

    It is not bad at all! I liked your design. But I think you should put more content and less "visual noise", like all those banners and interactive headers...
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    • Profile picture of the author Union
      Originally Posted by SeanLee View Post

      Hey!

      It is not bad at all! I liked your design. But I think you should put more content and less "visual noise", like all those banners and interactive headers...
      Thx, some of this banners will be deleted soon, im still working on design. Thx

      i just sign up on on your signature:gigbucks.com
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  • Profile picture of the author simonbuzz
    Banned
    Your content is less but the layout is good...one advice why don't you change your permalinks...
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    • Profile picture of the author Union
      Originally Posted by simonbuzz View Post

      Your content is less but the layout is good...one advice why don't you change your permalinks...
      Thx, will do it soon
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  • Profile picture of the author Craig McPherson
    Too much bolded text for me. It is in your face.
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    • Profile picture of the author Union
      Originally Posted by Craig McPherson View Post

      Too much bolded text for me. It is in your face.
      hmm :confused: that WP default, Click on post, and you'll see the the size of text.
      Thx
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    • Profile picture of the author chumpschimps
      Originally Posted by Craig McPherson View Post

      Too much bolded text for me. It is in your face.
      I would have to agree with that - I tried to look past it but it was distracting because there was too much of it. I would have looked at the titles/links more to find ones I wanted to read if I wasn't trying to ignore them.

      Overall, I like your theme
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  • Profile picture of the author onegoodman
    The banner photos, are not related to the website goal. I would suggest to take all the ads off for now. Many ads for new website can affect it badly.

    I would also suggest to have the title as a header or banner (the font is small).

    Overall the design of the blog looks neat
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  • Profile picture of the author Matt Barrington
    I like the template you used, but overall the site made my eyes hurt. I really don't like the adsense tower in the upper right corner. When I see sites with ads that don't fit in with the design like that, it makes me think this is just another adsense site with low quality content. Even if the content might be good, I already have a skeptics mindset towards it. I DO like the banner under the "about us" blurb, though. Keep that.
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