Someone with italian please look at this sentence and tell me if it's ok

by Fking 4 replies
I used google translate for it so it probably needs corrections


original:
CHEAP ROMA HOTELS!
STOP over paying and get the best deals in Roma!

italian:
ALBERGHI ECONOMICI ROMA!
Sosta a pagamento e ottenere la migliore offerta a Roma!
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    no italians around here?
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    thanks

    so google translate is kinda good!
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    • Profile picture of the author JFSebastian
      Hi I'm italian and i think in effect you promised a free parking in Rome
      at the best price.

      maybe

      ALBERGHI ECONOMICI A ROMA!

      Le migliori offerte per dormire una notte a Roma

      sounds better to me ..

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