Youtube

Personally, I think it would be better if you made more of an effort to get viewers to click on your link. You can do this by calling viewers to action and telling them where your link is.

The easiest way to do this is to put an arrow in the video that points to the link in your description box. Having the URL in the video is nice, but I've found that if you point viewers directly to the link and tell them to click on it, more people do it....funny[]

Same thing with the annotations. They are okay, but I think you might be better served using them to draw attention to your link, then to simply display the link.

The reason I say this is because people are freaking L-A-Z-Y and if you make them have to TYPE in a URL (especially a long or funny-looking one with slashes and whatnot in it) some of them, sometimes most of them, are just NOT going to do it.

However, if you tell them to click on a LINK....they are more likely to do that.

That's what a lot of these people do anyway online....click, click, click.....it's just so much FUN!!!![)]

I like how you named your YouTube Channel though.....

Ed

Hey, a few thoughts.

First i'd make these two changes to the copy.

"Well if you do then you understand just how savage your jealousy can be towards your relationship."

and then the next slide

"You know how it has taken its toll on your partner as well as yourself."

Once you've diagnosed the problem you want to be talking directly to them as if they have it.

Also, i'd cut your end credit down to a max of 5-7 seconds, and add a call to action. Why should they go there right now? Whats the benefit?

Other then that, nice video, soothing sounds!