Please tell me what you think of my first Video editing job?

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Hi Warriors,

I have many offline clients and this is the first one I have personally
edited and modified a video for.(It's really not my forte)

I would appreciate any feed back you have that could help me make it better.

I will be presenting it to my client later today when we meet up and feel
really nervous about creating the changes that I have made

The video was given to me with only the person talking and I had to
spruce it up and add all the special effects.

Don't hold back, Hit me with your true thoughts.


Thanks,
Have a Great Day!
Michael
#editing #job #video
  • Profile picture of the author cashflow08
    I like it. Maybe fade the two bars out when the guys speaking, and bring them up at the end. Just an idea. Otherwise it's cool man!
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  • Profile picture of the author creative producer
    Hi Michael, in the opening animation you spelled happiness: happyness. On purpose? Other than that, it looks good.
    The only other thing that comes to mind that you might add to your total package: Do you design a channel for him also, or does he already have that? Seems like the channel/profile is a big part of telling the story/setting the tone and providing a portal for interaction. Congrats on getting this done and good luck tomorrow. -CP
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    • Profile picture of the author Michael Mayo
      Hi Cashflow08,

      Great idea! <-(Will do, Thanks!)
      Originally Posted by cashflow08 View Post

      I like it. Maybe fade the two bars out when the guys speaking, and bring them up at the end. Just an idea. Otherwise it's cool man!
      Prety Creative Huh?...lol <-(Pun Intended)
      What can I say? I'm a Producer...ROFL...lol <-(Yes, That one too)

      OK, I'm better now, Sorry!

      Any way I Had to make sure Warriors were Focused.
      Good eye and Thanks for the honest review!
      Originally Posted by creative producer View Post

      Hi Michael, in the opening animation you spelled happiness: happyness. On purpose? Other than that, it looks good.
      The only other thing that comes to mind that you might add to your total package: Do you design a channel for him also, or does he already have that? Seems like the channel/profile is a big part of telling the story/setting the tone and providing a portal for interaction. Congrats on getting this done and good luck tomorrow. -CP
      Have a Great Day!
      Michael
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      • Profile picture of the author Michael Mayo
        Hi Warriors,

        Any other opinions/ideals for the video?

        I'll be meeting with this guy in about 4.5 hours and want to make a good
        impression.


        Thanks for your Help,
        Have a Great Day!
        Michael
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