How could I improve this landing page?

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Hi all,

I am just developing a new startup.
I don't want all users to see the dev. secrets, so I created a redirected page (landing page).
On that page can sign up for an email notification. It will notify them when our site hits the private BETA stage. (They will be the first ones to check the whole site out)

OK the site is: http://www.chilledlime.com

What is your opinion? How could I improve it? How could I get more people to sign up?

Thanks in advance.

Best Regards,
Akos
#chilledlime #improve #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author Marketing Cheetah
    I think its pretty simple and fine. You might want to get some ideas from a similar script (I am not affiliated with it) Coming Soon Page | Launching Soon Script | Coming Soon Website. If possible, I would reduce some text. Plus add some quality content.

    "All we can tell you about ChilledLime now, that it will be an intelligent and fun platform for online arguments."

    Thats not enough to get email ids of people. Attract them. Tell them what exactly your site is about.
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  • Profile picture of the author Brian Alaway
    I see one sentence that gives a vague idea what it's about but I don't see anything there that would compel me to sign up. You need to develop some pre-sales content.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dee Odus
    When I landed on your page, I asked myself "What's In It for Me", but I didn't get the answer. Hope you understand my point :-)
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    • Profile picture of the author rickdearr
      You might want to give away a free report on how to win an argument/debate. That way you are providing something now, that can prepare them for when you "open the doors".

      PM me if you'd like to test some software that allows you to test and track variations of your page.
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    • Profile picture of the author AkosBlog
      Originally Posted by Dee Odus View Post

      When I landed on your page, I asked myself "What's In It for Me", but I didn't get the answer. Hope you understand my point :-)
      Yes I understood it Because it is totally new, it will be hard for users to understand the essence of this site. This is because most of these days most of the sites out there are niche sites.
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  • Profile picture of the author augustusrome17
    Hi,

    The landing page font color and text background color looks dull. Choose some dark color. choose some background image with a symbol of debate or discussion.
    Plain and simple landing page.

    Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author stellaandreapark
    I just don't get the idea that I will be needing information that I see. That is the number one reason why people stay.
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    • Profile picture of the author AkosBlog
      Originally Posted by Mary Wilhite View Post

      Akos, there's nothing on your site except a beta invite.
      Like on most startups that are in BETA...

      This is not the actual homepage yet!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author omy123
    I think u need to improve the interactive features of the websites..
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    • Profile picture of the author Daniel Evans
      It needs a large, juicey headline.

      Something to pull the punters in.
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