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13 years ago

well here is a question are people actually going to your site, a good way to find out is via google analytics see if people are really visiting your site

another question did you build a list with your site, that would be a good idea if it were my site and its on the first page of google

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shubham

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Isaiah Jackson

well here is a question are people actually going to your site, a good way to find out is via google analytics see if people are really visiting your site

another question did you build a list with your site, that would be a good idea if it were my site and its on the first page of google

Just sign up for google analytics,,

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Alexa Smith

Banned 13 years ago

Hi Shubham,

LilBlackDress (above) has given such a good answer that it's hard to add much to it.

You should change the subtitle of your site. Where it says "Get all information on how to sweating", you've missed out the word "stop", and "Get all information" isn't great, either. I think the words "All the information you need on how to stop sweating" would do.

You need an affiliate disclosure, because at the moment your site isn't FTC compliant, and with its domain-name registered inside the US, that's a worry. (And for Amazon, too, I think, if they see it).

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shubham

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Alexa Smith

Hi Shubham,

LilBlackDress (above) has given such a good answer that it's hard to add much to it.

You should change the subtitle of your site. Where it says "Get all information on how to sweating", you've missed out the word "stop", and "Get all information" isn't great, either. I think the words "All the information you need on how to stop sweating" would do.

You need an affiliate disclosure, because at the moment your site isn't FTC compliant, and with its domain-name registered inside the US, that's a worry. (And for Amazon, too, I think, if they see it).

just changed that,,
lol :p

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LilBlackDress

13 years ago

Hi Shubham,

Sorry to hear you are not making sales. I took a look at your site and there are a number of reasons...

You are using Amazon widgets which do not covert very well.

At the end of your articles you have a link to your product but there is no build up to the sale. In fact with many of the links you say "click here". Why should the consumer click, when they don't know that they are clicking? You are not pre selling your customers.

The site is very plain and not enticing.

Try adding "StatCounter" and see what your visitors are doing. It is free and may give you some ideas.

Don't forget to add a privacy policy and disclaimer.

Hope this helps.

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Daniel Evans 13 years ago

What strikes me first is the bland theme you've chosen.

I'd suggest you pick something more attractive and get a nice header image developed.
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- shubham 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by webcore
  
  What strikes me first is the bland theme you've chosen.
  
  I'd suggest you pick something more attractive and get a nice header image developed.
  
  I'll update it to church theme...
  
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shubham

13 years ago

Originally Posted by LilBlackDress

Hi Shubham,

Sorry to hear you are not making sales. I took a look at your site and there are a number of reasons...

You are using Amazon widgets which do not covert very well.

At the end of your articles you have a link to your product but there is no build up to the sale. In fact with many of the links you say "click here". Why should the consumer click, when they don't know that they are clicking? You are not pre selling your customers.

The site is very plain and not enticing.

Try adding "StatCounter" and see what your visitors are doing. It is free and may give you some ideas.

Don't forget to add a privacy policy and disclaimer.

Hope this helps.

Statcounter ???

I don't know about this ,
can you tell me ,that how can i add this on my site..

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Martin Gram

13 years ago

You need to have more punch in your home page, and "seduce" your visitors so that you can lead them towards the products you selling.

Get a big nice headline and some benefits the visitor will feel on his/her own body.

The Amazon products confuses, unless they are you main product you are selling.

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onSubie

13 years ago

This is what I see for the latest articles:

var _gaq = _gaq || []; _gaq.push(['_setAccount', 'UA-26062974-1']); _gaq.push(['_trackPageview']); (function() { var ga = document.createElement('script'); ga.type = 'text/javascript'; ga.async = true; ga.src = ('https:' == document.location.protocol ? 'https://ssl' : 'http://www') + '.google-analytics.com/ga.js'; var s = document.getElementsByTagName('script')[0]; s.parentNode.insertBefore(ga, s); })(); Underarm sweating is a common problem faced by many. It can be really embarrassing and can even drive people away from

Not very readable or enticing...

Mahlon

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shubham 13 years ago

Originally Posted by onSubie

This is what I see for the latest articles:

Not very readable or enticing...

Mahlon

hi ,
just fixed that,
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- Greg guitar 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by shubham
  
  hi ,
  just fixed that,
  
  I stand corrected on that part-excellent action taking on your part! It is a wise person who asks the advice of others, and an even wiser one that acts on it, when the advise seems good after consideration.
  
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professorrosado 13 years ago

Very important lesson is to be learned here. That just being #1 on Google does not necessarily equate to sales. It's just a traffic source - everything else relies on your site, content and ability to persuade the visitor to click and buy.
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Bentley74

13 years ago

I agree with what others are saying (not really drawing me in at all).
Putting myself in the imaginary mindset of the seriously sweaty, stressed out guy hitting that site, I'm thinking "why do all the blog posts have titles that seem to be saying basically the same thing". "Why does this guy have so many ads jammed into the sidebar?"
"This doesn't seem like a site created by someone who REALLY knows about my sweating problem and understanding the stress I'm experiencing as a result".

As for me - I am firstly a little puzzled by the fact that you chose a blog format, but then basically just use titles that look like keywords directly out of the Adwords Keyword tool (or whatever keyword tool you are using). They don't look like they are intended for real human viewers.

I think you would do better with some sort of front page with info that demonstrates you understand the challenges of being excessively sweaty and stinky, and what you can offer as a potential solution. OR write blog posts better suited to capture the attention of real humans with sweaty issues!

Congrats on your rankings! That's awesome! There is probably plenty of potential for your to earn some money - but remember you are dealing with humans here! :-)

Best of luck!

B

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shubham

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Bentley74

I agree with what others are saying (not really drawing me in at all).
Putting myself in the imaginary mindset of the seriously sweaty, stressed out guy hitting that site, I'm thinking "why do all the blog posts have titles that seem to be saying basically the same thing". "Why does this guy have so many ads jammed into the sidebar?"
"This doesn't seem like a site created by someone who REALLY knows about my sweating problem and understanding the stress I'm experiencing as a result".

As for me - I am firstly a little puzzled by the fact that you chose a blog format, but then basically just use titles that look like keywords directly out of the Adwords Keyword tool (or whatever keyword tool you are using). They don't look like they are intended for real human viewers.

I think you would do better with some sort of front page with info that demonstrates you understand the challenges of being excessively sweaty and stinky, and what you can offer as a potential solution. OR write blog posts better suited to capture the attention of real humans with sweaty issues!

Congrats on your rankings! That's awesome! There is probably plenty of potential for your to earn some money - but remember you are dealing with humans here! :-)

Best of luck!

B

means you are asking me to remove some of the ads form my site ,
but the problem is that if i remove my ads then how can i able to sale !!!

I'll try to edit my titles,,

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Greg guitar 13 years ago

Originally Posted by shubham

means you are asking me to remove some of the ads form my site ,
but the problem is that if i remove my ads then how can i able to sale !!!

Does this mean you're only using the site to try to sell books from Amazon? I think if that is the case, you need to work on getting your own product, or doing a joint venture with an expert, so you can get a bigger cut of a higher priced item (like a whole program, including a workbook, cds, etc, maybe in the $50-100 range).
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Nato Guajardo

13 years ago

Where is the call to action?

I don't see it. If I can't see it then I'm sure others aren't either.

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Greg guitar

13 years ago

When you're trying to convert cold Google traffic you need to think in terms of building a relationship before expecting a sale, and the traditional way of doing that is to give value up front with some sort of a giveaway that accomplishes three main objectives, the top one being, entice visitors to opt in to your email list so you can put them into an autoresponder sequence. The secondary objectives are to start the relationship building process, turning visitors into fans, and of course, to prove your expertise on your niche. Then your conversions will vastly improve, because you're selling to people who are fans that feel indebted for the value already given, rather than total strangers who don't even know if you'll deliver anything after you've taken their money.

The collection of articles which is on the site now needs to be saved for after they sign up, if ever. Nobody searching for a solution to their excessive sweating is likely to stick around and read the articles, especially since the first couple of them start off like this: "var _gaq = _gaq || []; _gaq.push(['_setAccount', 'UA-26062974-1']); _gaq.push(['_trackPageview']); (function() { var ga = document.createElement(‘script’); ga.type = ‘text/javascript’; ga.async = true; ga.src = (‘https:’ == document.location.protocol ? ‘https://ssl’ : ‘http://www’) + ‘.google-analytics.com/ga.js’; var s = document.getElementsByTagName(‘script’)[0]; s.parentNode.insertBefore(ga, s); })();"

Would you stick around on a site that started with the incomprehensible gibberish above? Even if you use them later, you need to get rid of the unreadable parts.

I suggest just a video, 3-4 bullet points, and a sign up form. Other than that, I second the excellent suggestions already made above.

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pankajchandel123

13 years ago

There is very simple answer to your question
Dude you are ranking for your keyword in google.co.in.All ur visitors r from India.
No one in India uses amazon to purchase things.How do you expect to make sale.
Your niche is good.You will definitely make sales if you will rank in google US.Make more backlinks .Competition more tough in US.

Hope it helps

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shubham

13 years ago

Hi,
Thanks all for helping me...
i'll update my site soon ......

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shubham

13 years ago

HI,
Thanks for your good luck,

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HazeBlazer

13 years ago

It's just very bland, your articles are similar and if you could make the articles sound more like you understand their sweating problem, and offer different tips and solutions, try to diversify your niche, like create a section for people who sweat heavily at night and offer solutions, and another section for other types of abnormal sweating and another section for the best products that stop sweating and offer links to them and etc... I can think of so much that can be done here but you found a good niche, which is where the brilliance in mindset lies, finding the right niches.

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