Blood, sweat and tears on display. Could you take a look at my sales page and give me some input?

Daniel and All,

Really great thread. Took a loof at the site. Everything everyone has said fits. Clean, no pimples here. But...

Man, if you get the traffic and you upgrade this thing, I think you've got a moneymaker. What's so different in this new web2.0 or whatever it is now, you can create your own infomercial. You need big time testimonials. You need a picture of someone who had a bad face go to a good face. How do you get this - and, more importantly, be legitimate, is up to you. But, look, you could have video of people swearing your technique or some technique in your material did it for them.

Let's look at it this way: If what you are selling is for real honest to goodness going to help. let's get that front and center, as plain as the nose and the pimples on it on your face. Sorry, had to throw that in.

I want faces. I want video. Youtube. Application of techniques. I want you to give this information to people to apply, along with whatever creams or whatever. I want you to become, for a time, Mr. Get-the-pimples-off-your-face Guy. Make it a quest. Am I going overboard? I don't think so. I think you've got something here, and you can go with this, but think about upgrading and making a big launch, with quite a bit of out in the physical world activity, celebration, as well.

The way your site is now, I can see someone looking aver it thinking, "huh, maybe this'll work - aw, no. Oh well, maybe, I've got a few extra dollars. How much is this thing anyway? I've tried everything else..." No. You want them to sit up and think, holy ###, this could work. I mean, I've got to try it just to see if it does. And what can it hurt, there's a money back guarentee. I've just got to find out. I'm willing to pay just to see if this stuff is for real.

About the pretty website. Oh man. I spent two years writing coming up with the material and building a great sales page and graphics and coming up with the copy and slogans. No one bit. Not a bite. Not even a nibble. And yet the information is fantastic. So I realized I was in a mindset of marketing something, trying to make it look good so someone would buy it. Now what I'm realizing is that what matters is content, baby. If my stuff is that good, I need to get some people to work it on. See if my information truly changes them - and get this on tape. I'm also thinking that the site itself wouldn't have to look like much if - IF - I had a bunch of folks on the social sites trying it and talking it up.

I'd also have some video showing - having someone talk - about how rotten it is to have acne and how great it was to not have it any more. Appeal to emotions. I'd also give away some freebie info - besides the opt-in - just give away some freebie info. I might even speak to the directly - a vid - talk about how important this subject is to me and why I want to see it work for you and you and you and you.

And how did you come up with all this information? Why does it work? How does it work? Do you have any dermatologists saying anything about any of the methods? What do the dermatologists say? Give us as much expertise as you can muster. Make us and our pimples shrink before your authority.

We expect more, nowdays, from the net. It's not a magazine anymore. It's not even television. It's something else, a multi-media extravaganza. So, great start. now, upgrade and make this thing a real cash cow. Thanks, Beau