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Will You Help Me Please With Squidoo Lense???

by Kerryrus
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Hello Warriors,

I have just published my first lense. Could you be so kind as to take a look and rate it as well as give me some feedback. I'm fairly new to them.

http://squidoo.com/How-To-Build-A-List2

Regards

Kerry
#lense #squidoo
  • Profile picture of the author Amy Harrop
    Hi,
    I went on and liked your page through Squidoo. I thought your main article was pretty good, but my suggestion is to break it up a bit as it seem like a long block of text. Maybe do bullet points with fast action tips on how to quickly get started with giveaways.

    Also you don't mention how to build a list fast until halfway through the article, which may lose people. Another suggestion would be to reformat your article into problem/solution bullet list style.
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    It will help a lot also if you can add video/s to it people usually go more for visual than reading
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  • Profile picture of the author Kerryrus
    Thankls for the feedback Is appreciated

    Kerry
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  • Profile picture of the author cjreynolds
    Originally Posted by Kerryrus View Post

    Hello Warriors,

    I have just published my first lense. Could you be so kind as to take a look and rate it as well as give me some feedback. I'm fairly new to them.

    How To Build A List

    Regards

    Kerry
    I think Amy has the right take - a little more white space or another image or two would break things up a bit, but otherwise, great lens!
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