Which Sales Page You Like More?

For me, I would go with the first one but either way, you don't have to listen to what I said. Both of it are well done, just focus on what you deliver to your customers and make sure that you fulfill whatever promises with the contents and offer you are about to give them! Content and offer over sales page, that's my first rule as a customer!

Sales page should be decent enough for customers to understand what you are offering, that's all! No need to go crazy over graphics!

@Brandon Huang: Hey mate! Thanks for your reply! So number one has +1

@lamatic: Hey lamatic, nice to see some romanian marketers in here . Score is 2-0

I like the first page good luck with it

i will do the first one.

Nice work on both tho

I like the first one best.

Disclaimer: Sales pages may be my biggest weakness. My testing usually proves my instincts were incorrect. I like to test, test, test. Additionally, I will take conversions over opinions every time.

the first one for sure.. but you need to use stronger fonts for your headlines..

the font you are using for the headlines in the second design are stronger / better then whats being used in the first design.

I forgot to mention... In the first one - the boxes showing the tools is one of the best and strongest parts of your sales page. In my view it would be good to get those higher up on the page. It may also help to change the background color and borders of either the tools or the testimonials. They look too similar so the tools are not standing out like they should.

I think I like the first one better. It got me to read and watch the videos. The second one left me cold.

I have three suggestions:

First, I felt like I'm not sure how the product can help me... even though I can guess. I'd like to see a video, maybe is a case study, that shows you using the product from start to finish on a project and giving the financial results of the use of the product. I hate the videos the way they are now. They are abrupt and don't answer questions... benefits, benefits, benefits... get inside the mind of your customer.

Second, you didn't convince me that I would actually make money as a result of buying your product. For $167, I assume USD, I must be convinced that I will make money.

Third, I think that your price point is way too high. Especially since you didn't convince me that I will make money. Essentially, you are asking me to assume the risk of the purchase... I've bought automation software before and I have always ended up getting a refund. Why is yours different? As it stands now from the sales presentation that I saw, I probably wouldn't pay more than 30 or 40 bucks, USD, for it because I assume I'll be asking for a refund if I even want to bother.

On the flip side, if it works like I assume it was designed to, it has great promise. But you didn't convince me that I should/want to buy it.

Best regards,
Al

I like the first one too.
"Did you ever get..." Not got.

Honestly, with your statement that you don't understand them, you immediately create a disconnect with your consumers. I wouldn't use that paragraph but instead suggest something stronger, like what you used in the next paragraph.

Why?
Your readers don't care what you learned so far.
They care if you are perceived an expert in this field.

"YouTube Marketing is all about the right tactics and having the right tools! And I can show you how to create a successful YouTube campaign!" Or something like that.

Your next paragraph "How could I be frustrated..."
"You TOO can be banking checks like this.." [screen shot]

In your "Dear Video Marketer", you don't want the consumers to question a would belive [typo].

Create no doubt in the consumers mind that you can provide results:

If you're ready to start making money using YouTube Marketing, I will show you how to get top rankings in two minutes:

• Find and analyze the best keywords for YOUR niche.
• Create effective titles, descriptions and tags.
• Create a new video and upload it immediately.

If you are asking people to think you're nuts.....

You must make sure you have no typos or grammatical errors.

"easyest"
"applyied"
"anywear"
"bellow"

When I am writing content for my sites, I first type in word to make sure there are no typos. Maybe you could try that?

If you are going to use "lazy", I would not use it directly. Rather, I would say something like "Even the laziest person can benefit..."

The points at the end of the page are some of the things you could use towards the top of the page to soft sell the consumer.


I hope this helps. I wish you great success. -Lori

wuhuu ! Thanks for the suggestions ! I really like them!
I will wait for more reivews and tomorrow will modify the sales page.

Thanks!!

First one!

I like the first one best, but you do need to get the English tidied up.

Good luck with it.

Will

First one!

Agree, the first one has much more energy, it's way more attractive and interesting and pulled me in, where as the second one was bland and uninspiring.

I think that something that has to do with video marketing course , definitely has to have a video on top of the page.
Also is been known that a video sales page converts much better then one without it.
I liked more the first page but I would work on the video if I were you.
Good luck

Really great sales pages. The first one looks best to me but until you change "Got" to "Get" i already have trust issues in the professionalism of the page. Just my two cents :rolleyes:

Hey guys,
Thanks for the suggestions!

@winseosoft: do you know somebody who can create those CB style intro movies? ( but not the part with the cars and things as I find them kind of lame )

Cheers,
Stoica