Critique My Sales Funnel

by kbs 2 replies
Hey guys I'd like you to critique my sales funnel.

Here it is in a nutshell:

article------->success story------------>personal review-------->affiliate sales page

I'd like honest opinions please about the process.

For example: is it too long, do I need to take a step out, am I having trouble connecting with the reader etc..

Try and put yourself in the visitor's shoes and let me know what I need to tweak.

Here's the article page: The Right Way to Get Your Boyfriend Back - Why Your Next Move Will Make It Or Break It | How To Get Your Ex Back Guaranteed

Thanks so much,

#main internet marketing discussion forum #critique #funnel #sales
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  • Profile picture of the author Benjamin Ehinger
    I think you can combine the personal review and success story. These are kinda the same thing as it is and many people go from an article to wanting to see a review of the product with features and benefits. Then, as they get through the content you could put the success story in the middle to split it up a bit or at the end as your final presell.

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    Thanks for the feed back. Just read your post on article marketing and thought it was great.

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