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Please Comment - New Site - Need Advice - Thank You!

by derrickzv
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Hi Warriors!
Have been working on this website now for 4 weeks and am looking for HONEST Reviews from newbies and gurus alike...

We still have a way to go, new graphics etc...but want feedback in ref. to layout, design and user friendliness...

Please post comments and advice and how you would improve the site for maximum exposure and conversion...

Thank you in advance for your wisdom...
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Webb
    Thoughts ...

    Pretty, attractive design, looks professional, but serious waste of white space up the top - perfect for a short, one line statement that tells me what this website can do for me (it took a while to figure out). Eg -

    "Cure stress, ailments and pains with Bellabaci cupping treatments"

    Check my website out, you'll see a similiar thing up top.

    Banner looks like an advert but it's not clickable. If it's intended to drive sales within the site it's better to not make it look like an advert.

    Buy page looks good - if you can, try and make the big product images clickable to send them to Paypal - that should be as simply as hacking the paypal html form code to include you images (your techie will know how).

    Your home page may work better as a mini sales letter, that quickly targets the problem your product addresses and draws visitors into the sales funnel. Go visit the copywriting forum here for help, there are tonnes of helpful folks in there!

    Hope that helped.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sheryl Polomka
    I have to agree with the big empty wasted space. I would have a header half the length so you don't have to scroll down the page before you see anything useful.

    Other than that, I like the design and layout, it looks really professional.
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  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    Spelling and grammar are a problem for starters.
    If you consider your side bar navigation as important, then it is too far down the page.
    I agree that there is too much white.
    That's all I can really say different to the other people commenting.
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  • Profile picture of the author wowcolombia1
    Im gonna tell you what i think about the website:
    I liked the website but the only thing i think that is not going to help you is to find the content.Yep you need to make it easer for people to access to your article without having to read alot of things to find the link to the article you want people to read.You should make the pages at the top more atractive like if you are trying to make a page about losing cellulite dont name it like that,name it how to lose cellulite or other things like 10 ways to lose cellulite.
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    • Profile picture of the author Azarna
      IMHO it is a nice looking website overall.

      There are a few typos - "from modren day stress"

      "Doctor recommended, Spa approved" - which doctor? which spa?

      You make a LOT of medical claims. Do you have any evidence or clinical trial results for any of them? Adding a bit of evidence of how it has worked for people would give the site a lot more credibility.

      I like the overall cleaness of the site, it is very attractive and easy on the eye - whichfits well with the subject matter.
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  • Profile picture of the author jgant
    In the "Order your Set" today section (under the white space) I wanted to click into the two lists you have (starting with cellulite and digestive disorders) to read more how your product helps all those conditions.

    I think articles with links to them in that location would be good. By quickly scanning your home page I don't fully understand what your product does (but I was intrigued for sure). Is it for relaxation or ailment relief, or both?

    I also tried clicking the boxes on the home page (face, body, etc.) and they don't lead anywhere.

    Your product appears to be somewhat novel so I think it would help to provide detailed information that easily locatable for prospective customers. I'm certainly intrigued by it.

    The design is great, except filling in the white space would be good as mentioned already.
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  • Profile picture of the author socialhydra
    I like it. Very neat website and professional looking.
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