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Feedback on headline

by aidenandersen
1 replies
Hey I would like to have some feedback on my headlines....

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#feedback #headline
  • Profile picture of the author abugah
    Try this...
    1. At Last! You Can Have The Unstoppable Power Of Attracting Any Woman.
    2. Dating Expert Reveals Secrets of Attracting any Woman.
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    Generally...
    a) Have only one idea in the headline.
    b) Have benefits, news or curiosity in your headline.
    c) Say common things in uncommon ways.
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