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So I made my first Video Salesletter

by RonnyRaygun
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I finally hunkered down and finished a video salesletter.

Anyone care to provide some input? I followed loosely this template: 12 Step Fool-Proof Sales Letter Template

Salesletter can be found at www.BritishBoxBreakout.com/BBBSystem/

I should note that I am aware that the video loads slowly. I'm not 100% what's causing that, and am looking for a solution.
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    It didn't work very well for me. It took forever to load and then once it had, it played for about 15 seconds and then cut out again.

    What format video is it? Mp4? If so, you may have the meta data at the end of the video which means the whole video needs to load before it plays. There are some free software programs you can use which will move the meta data to the beginning of the mp4 file so the video can start playing whilst it downloads.
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  • Profile picture of the author scraig
    The slow load time could be a real problem. I almost left the page because it appeared it wasn't going to load. Good job on the sales letter though.
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    • Profile picture of the author kenmichaels
      i guess you fixed it, because it loaded and played for me with in about 10 seconds.

      also, at first i was thinking it is pretty dry and soft spoken.
      but some how towards the end i wanted the software,

      so.... even tho i did not particularly care for it. it did its job
      i wanted to buy it. and that is what its all about.
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  • Profile picture of the author wfhblueprints
    Originally Posted by RonnyRaygun View Post

    I finally hunkered down and finished a video salesletter.

    Anyone care to provide some input? I followed loosely this template: 12 Step Fool-Proof Sales Letter Template

    Salesletter can be found at www.BritishBoxBreakout.com/BBBSystem/

    I should note that I am aware that the video loads slowly. I'm not 100% what's causing that, and am looking for a solution.
    Hey Ronny,

    I would make more of a meal of the pricing....

    Something along the lines of how much would you pay for a piece of software that could make you xxx? Then start with a large price and end with your proper price....

    Makes them feel that they have gotten a bargain of a deal and that is your best price.....

    I was half expecting your price to go down after that initial $37..

    Other than that! GREAT work!

    Regards

    Chris
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  • Profile picture of the author RonnyRaygun
    Hey Chris,

    That's a great idea, I think I'll apply your method for my next split test.
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