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The Worst Copywriting EVER!

by MeTellYou
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Hi,

I am SUCH a looser

Here's the story:

On Saturday I finished my new product and decided to give it to ten people here for a review, so I slapped a few sentences together to let you guys know about it:

http://www.warriorforum.com/main-int...eo-course.html

I woke up Monday morning (my time) and realized that I got only 2 responses from people.

I of course started thinking why and read the copy again...

I figured that since I do it for free, I don't have to apply good copywriting, you know...

I mean if you read the above post, it's pretty ridiculous:
-- No good headline
-- No good story
-- No proof
-- etc... (I mean... it's ridiculous!)

I guess I forgot that even though I don't take money for it, I do ask you for your time which is equally valuable.

Lesson learnt.
Well... I feel embarrassed
#copywriting #worst
  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    First of all, it's loser, not looser ("looser" means it is more loose).

    Secondly, you're not a loser. We all make mistakes. Thanks for reminding us of this important point.

    Thirdly, most people on this forum are from the US/Canada/UK. We use decimals in our numbers, not commas. I know in France they use decimals instead of commas, maybe it's the other way around too.

    Try changing it to - The price is 1 cent per word in the original document. Or $0.01 per word in the original. Or something.

    -Dan
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    • Profile picture of the author Charann Miller
      Originally Posted by Daniel Scott View Post

      First of all, it's loser, not looser ("looser" means it is more loose).

      Secondly, you're not a loser. We all make mistakes. Thanks for reminding us of this important point.

      Thirdly, most people on this forum are from the US/Canada/UK. We use decimals in our numbers, not commas. I know in France they use decimals instead of commas, maybe it's the other way around too.

      Try changing it to - The price is 1 cent per word in the original document. Or $0.01 per word in the original. Or something.

      -Dan

      We also use decimals here in New Zealand too in case you ever had a burning desire to know, hehehe.

      You are not a loser at all. You learned a valuable lesson that makes you wiser if anything.
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  • Profile picture of the author MeTellYou
    Thanks guys
    I appreciate your support. I think it is a great idea to make make changes to my numbers. Thanks for that too

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