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Title and Tag Line Help!

by Thecatman
6 replies
Hey,

I'm opening up a massage therapy business late this year for students and those with
learning disabilities, offering Swedish Massage and Indian Head Massage, and trying to
come up with a decent Headline and Description. Here is what I've got so far:

Title: Massage Dundee: Giving the care you 'knead'
Title: Massage Dundee... one is not enough.
Title: Massage Dundee Will Make You Feel Better
Tag: Ease Away the Stresses of Your Day With A Swedish Massage at Massage Dundee

Does any one have any other tips/advice on how to make it more attention grabbing?
#line #tag #title
  • Profile picture of the author davejug1
    Come on, get a little fruity with it, double entendres will hopefully get your list opening them.

    "Massage your head to release the pressure"
    "Ever had your head massaged by a Swede?"
    "Keep your clothes on! I meant the head on your shoulders"
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    • Profile picture of the author Thecatman
      Originally Posted by davejug1 View Post

      Come on, get a little fruity with it, double entendres will hopefully get your list opening them.

      "Massage your head to release the pressure"
      "Ever had your head massaged by a Swede?"
      "Keep your clothes on! I meant the head on your shoulders"
      Cheers mate, but this is for a website title and description.
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  • Profile picture of the author bobjc
    I am using an image as my blog header, but in order to not display the "Blog Title" & Tag Line from display (I have blanked it out in my Settings). I know this is SEO suicide, but I do not know the correct way to hide this from display and yet provide the search engines with this most valuable info.
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  • Profile picture of the author dave147
    "Gentle Swedish Massage Dundee" - We handle you with care
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    • Profile picture of the author Thecatman
      Originally Posted by dave147 View Post

      "Gentle Swedish Massage Dundee" - We handle you with care
      I like the, 'We handle you with care'.

      Keep 'em coming.
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      • Profile picture of the author Christina123
        Hi,
        The Domain name, in fact the whole URL of a website tells more about the site. The page title is also very important place because the contents of the title tag usually gets displayed in most of search engines. So, all these things make your site more attention grabbing.
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