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Sales Page Convertion Question/Help

by BryanZ
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Hello fellow warriors,

I've got a self help product (link below) which I truly believe can change the lives of people because I've done it several times with my clients and so far I've had a 100% success rate but I'm not getting any sales of it online, I tried advertising on google and facebook but never got any sales. all of my 7 sales in the past month has been from people that found my product in the cb market and from people that watched my free demo video on youtube where im getting around 200 views per day.

My question is: Is there something I need to fix in my sales page so it can start converting better and actually making some sales. I would love to get some feedback and suggestions. Thanks in advance!

Bryan Z.

Link to my sales page
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Originally Posted by BryanZ View Post

    Hello fellow warriors,

    I've got a self help product (link below) which I truly believe can change the lives of people because I've done it several times with my clients and so far I've had a 100% success rate but I'm not getting any sales of it online, I tried advertising on google and facebook but never got any sales. all of my 7 sales in the past month has been from people that found my product in the cb market and from people that watched my free demo video on youtube where im getting around 200 views per day.

    My question is: Is there something I need to fix in my sales page so it can start converting better and actually making some sales. I would love to get some feedback and suggestions. Thanks in advance!

    Bryan Z.

    Link to my sales page
    Hi Bryan,

    You may get some better responses if posted in the copywriting
    section of the forum.

    But your post is a little confusing. You indicated that you are
    not making any sales yet you made 7 sales? How did you make
    those 7 sales if not from your sales letter?

    I think you need to clarify this first.

    Also, even though true, nobody is going to believe that you had
    a 100% success rate. Did I say it wasn't true? No, just that
    it's not believable.

    -Ray Edwards
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    • Profile picture of the author BryanZ
      Originally Posted by Raydal View Post

      Hi Bryan,

      You may get some better responses if posted in the copywriting
      section of the forum.

      But your post is a little confusing. You indicated that you are
      not making any sales yet you made 7 sales? How did you make
      those 7 sales if not from your sales letter?

      I think you need to clarify this first.

      Also, even though true, nobody is going to believe that you had
      a 100% success rate. Did I say it wasn't true? No, just that
      it's not believable.

      -Ray Edwards
      Hi Ray,

      Thanks for your time and replying back. I think you are right and I should have just stated at first that I've only had 7 sales from that sales page (or sales latter) total.

      On how I made those sales, well these were from people that had already been browsing through the CB Market for a product like mine but no sales were made from ads I had placed on google and facebook.

      I'm a newbie here so I'll post it in the copywriting section of the forum.

      Oh and on that not being believable to most people, I can appreciate that. Going back to the original question I'm just looking to get some feedback on the sales page before investing more money in advertising. Once again, thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Randall Magwood
    Have you considered testing price? Lowering it a bit?
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  • Profile picture of the author Tim Russ
    Your headline doesn't make any bold claims, doesn't make any real promises and only hints at any kind of benefit. Truth be told you lost me before I even got to the headline. If I hadn't been reviewing it for the purpose of helping you out I would simply have done what I suspect most of your visitors are doing...clicked the back button.
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