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Headline Writers - Please Help! Best 2 Win $20 Each...

by Steven Fullman
21 replies
Hi Folks,

It's been a long day, and I'm now pretty short on inspiration

I'm looking for 2 benefit-driven headlines/subheads for my free report (so I can split-test), and I know my creative and talented Warrior buddies are always up for a challenge!

The report is all about Custom Guitars...how to design them, make them, all that kind of stuff.

Please help!

The best 2 heads/subheads will get $20 each, and I'd like to get this done and dusted in the next few hours (if possible)

You can all have a laugh at my feeble first attempt here:

The Custom Electric Guitar Blog

(just wait a few seconds after the page loads)

...but I must make one thing clear, please don't sign up, even if you feel strangely hypnotized into doing so (not!)...

Because I don't want this post to be seen as self-promotional :rolleyes:

Thanks, all.
Steve
#$20 #headline #win #writers
  • Profile picture of the author Graham Maddison
    Here's one:

    How To Be A Guitar Hero And Make Your Own Guitar

    Graham
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    • Profile picture of the author YiKeS
      G`day Steven,

      first advice is to get rid of "The .." from your header
      headline so it reads as the name of the site is ... that`ll
      keep you down in the SERP`s as is.
      (STOP words the .. and .. or .. etc etc)

      So my suggestion is ...

      ========================

      Custom Electric Guitar Blog
      Customized String Instruments

      ========================

      I have a Fender™ acoustic ..

      Christopher J.

      **EDIT**
      DUHH ME!! .. Didn`t see it is for a Report .. LOL
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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    I build guitars when I have the time. Classicals. Try this:

    "Here's How You Can Own A Custom Guitar Worth Over $3595 For
    Under $400"

    That's the hook, IMO. It was for me when I started.

    I started building guitars because I was trying out Taylor's
    at a store and only had a couple hundred bucks to invest
    - and I had an interest in building stuff... I figured I
    could just get the tools and supplies and build a pretty
    cool guitar and have bragging rights.

    Every dude who plays some guitar thinks it would be super-
    coll to build 'em.
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  • Profile picture of the author RedMatrix
    Six Steps To A New Six String (I don't know how many steps there are)

    Don't Fret, Now You Can Have A Custom Guitar
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    ~Dave

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  • Profile picture of the author Jonathan 2.0
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    I don't know anything about your market some I'm just going to riff one off (hehe) and see where it lands.

    "Imagine The Satisfaction Of Feeling The Authentic, Superb, Hand-Made Quality Of A Custom Made Guitar In Your Hands ... And The Sound, Oh The Sound! ... You Owe It It Yourself To Learn How To Build And Own A Custom Made Guitar For A Price That Would Make The Most Accomplished Enthusiast Green With Envy ..."

    If it's not 100% you can always modify it and use it as something of a template for creating an improved version.
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  • Profile picture of the author JayXtreme
    Imagine Having The Ability To Design, Prepare, and Build Your Very Own Custom Made Guitar. There's No reason Why You Can't Have It Assembled, Painted, Polished, Tuned Up And Rocking In As Little As 30 Days!"
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    Bare Murkage.........

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    • Profile picture of the author Martin Luxton
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      Download my free 61 page report that shows you step by step how to make your own custom guitar and you'll soon have a classic guitar collection for pennies on the dollar.

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  • Profile picture of the author getsmartt
    Headers

    "Build a World Class Guitar on Garage Band Budget!"

    "Who Makes the Worlds Best Guitar, You Do!"

    "What do Leo Fender, Orville Gibson, Adolph Rickenbacker and Les Paul all have in common, they built their own custom guitars, now you can too!"

    Sub headers

    "Easy to follow instructions will have you rocking your custom guitar in no time"

    "Custom guitar expert shares his fool proof secrets to building your own awesome axe"

    "This ebook by a custom guitar expert teaches you the secrets to building your own guitar for less than half the price of buying one"

    mix and match as you please
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  • Profile picture of the author BFMedia
    "Tough Economic Times Doesn't Mean Rocking Out A Custom Guitar Has To Cost A Fortune"

    "Don't Get Played By The Retail Stores...Your Own Custom Guitar Is Just A Few Dollars Away!"

    Good luck man!
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  • Profile picture of the author Efrain Hernandez
    "The Economic Times are Hard! DON'T Let That Stop You From Owning The Guitar of Your Dreams!"

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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
    Wow...

    Thanks all.

    There are some great ideas here

    Just a couple of hours left. Can you top the headlines (and subheads, too) already submitted?

    Thanks very much, Warriors.

    You warm my heart.

    Steve
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    • Profile picture of the author Steven Wagenheim
      Steve, for whatever it's worth, my vote is for Loren's. That would hook me
      as well and I'm a musician so I ought to know.

      Great headline Loren.

      Ever think of becoming a copywriter?
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      • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
        Originally Posted by Steven Wagenheim View Post

        Steve, for whatever it's worth, my vote is for Loren's. That would hook me
        as well and I'm a musician so I ought to know.

        Great headline Loren.

        Ever think of becoming a copywriter?
        I hear you, Steve, and agreed.

        ...but I did ask for a subhead, too

        That reminds me though, Steve...may I bend your ear a little?

        Cheers,
        Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author mormel
    Hi,

    What about:

    Nothing Plays the Blues - Like Your Self-Made Guitar

    Or:

    For No More Than a Handful - You Can Play Your Own Guitar


    Sounds not too bad...

    Yours, guitarly, Ed
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  • Profile picture of the author John Rowe
    Steve, go to Amazon and type in make guitar, build guitar, whatever.
    Titles sell books. And they make great headline models. Good luck.
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      Tired Of Using The Same Old Notes As Every Other Guitar Player? Build Your Own Custom Guitar And Put Those Pesky Frets Where Your Fingers Can Find Them!



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      • Profile picture of the author Ricky Allen
        Hi Steven, try this one for size.

        Guitar Legend Or Job Dead End, Your Choice.

        You Don't Have To Go All The Way Down To Memphis To Look For A Guitar Man,
        As I'll Reveal To You How You Can Create Your Own Custom Guitar
        For Less Than The Price Of The Bus To Memphis!

        Take Care

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  • Profile picture of the author Bruce NewMedia
    Prehead: "Fed Up With Your Local Musical Instrument Store?"...

    HEAD: Now, Even A Poor Struggling Musician Can Own A Custom Guitar
    They'll Be Proud Of, For Just A Fraction Of Retail Store Prices"

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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
    Loren Woirhaye and Martin Luxton

    Please PM your PP addresses to me!

    You're now going head-to-head in the split-
    test challenge!

    Thanks to everyone who took the time to
    help out...but there had to be only two
    winners.

    I love you all.

    Thanks a million,
    Steve
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