My First Review Site-Any Input Is Appriciated

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Hello everyone. First of all I do not know if I am posting this at the right place. If not, sorry. I have just created my first review wordpress blog on fat loss and muscle building, and I was wondering if any of you would care to take a look at it. Any input will be appreciated. Here is the adress. howtobuildmusclenaturally.com.Thank you.

PS-Sorry I still haven't figured out how to create links yet.
#appriciated #input #review #siteany
  • Profile picture of the author stephenh
    I just had a look. Is that you (Jim Atilson) writing on the site or is it someone else?

    Do you like wp or do you know any html basic site stuff?

    Stephen
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    • Profile picture of the author chayati
      Hi Stephenh,
      yes it is me on the picture along with my wife. So far I do like Wp, even though it seems a bit complicated for me and learning html is in my to do list.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jassim
    I just had a look. It's looking good. But i noticed the heading is all CAPS, it's not looking good to me. Just Caps the 1st letter in every word in heading..or the font is not suitable.. hey just my suggestion.
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    • Profile picture of the author chayati
      Hello Jassim,
      thank you for the input. I have taken on your suggestion and tried to use capital letters in the beginning of each word, but it did not work, or I could not get to function.
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  • Profile picture of the author SoEasyMoney
    Hi there. BUILD MUSCLE NATURALLY AND LOSE FAT QUICKLY.
    Looked at the site quickly. My personal opinion is it's a GREAT start. I would use softer colors and I think I would put some of your products on your first page.
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  • Profile picture of the author artwebster
    The site looks good once you get past that awful black header. Your black back ground does the site no favours, either.

    I can imagine that the 'gears' logo could indicate the methodology in building muscle naturally but I think it would be better if you used the same logo each time.

    Your opening paragraph might be more attractive if it had the points listed vertically instead of having bracketed numbers scattered through the prose.

    Maybe you could soften that header by including a muscular torso - after all, shouldn't the home page have a picture of the product or benefit?
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    You might not like what I say - but I believe it.
    Build it, make money, then build some more
    Some old school smarts would help - and here's to Rob Toth for his help. Bloody good stuff, even the freebies!

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  • Profile picture of the author chayati
    Hello Artwebster and Soeasymoney,
    Thank you for your suggestions. Once I figure out how this WB template works, I will be making the changes. Take care.
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