Is this a good sales page?

I like it. I'd promote it if I had an MMA fitness list.

21 minutes might be pushing it. Testing and time will tell.

Who knows man.

I think it would be better if they put a link that says "Click here if you prefer to read rather than watch the video" and it sends you to a written sales page rather than a video one.

That appeals to me a lot more.

Well, insofar as it comprises video and not much text (which lot of people dislike and some people can't/won't even view), I'd say it's not a good sales-page.

Then again, that doesn't account for everyone and, frankly, I know sweet beggar all about MMA so am in no position to judge on what the product promises to deliver.

What I do know, however, is that it's difficult to sell Clickbank products as an affiliate without building a mailing-list and pre-selling.

I don't wish to rain on your parade, but my own advice would be to re-evaluate your entire promotional strategy or else prepare yourself for a lot of frustration and wasted money.

I think the button doesn't show up until you've reached a certain number of posts. Ten, is it? (I can't quite remember). Not many, anyway.

Do this...

Get a short promo video up there with an optin form below it. Drop the 2nd video on page 2 after an optin form.

In the promo video explain some highlights and what they get after optin (21 minute video and any other free stuff).

This will build a list of interested people for this product. This is more valuable then the sales you'll get from one sales page. In fact, it will be MUCH more valuable.

You can sell them the product on page 2. Or contact them in the future to buy the product or look at something esle.

I made this type of change a couple of years ago. Now I have huge lists for a variety of different products. It makes selling much easier.

At the end of the month you can send out a "Special Offer" email. A one day sale. It will pull in business for you from people who did not buy on the first visit.

If you did not develop the list...you would never see these sales.

Trust me on this one...

Build the list is priority 1. Selling that product is a distant 2nd/

afilmarket,

In response to your comments about "having no control" (this may be a long shot, and I don't want to complicate things for you either, but worth considering, perhaps, at least in the future if not now).

If you really believe in the product but have no luck in getting the vendor to add to or change his sales page, you could perhaps get his/her permission to use various components of the original sales material and construct your own. Or build one entirely from scratch, if you're feeling particularly adventurous.

With Clickbank there is a way of constructing "buy now" links containing your hard-coded affiliate ID, to put on your own site/sales-page, that take customers directly to the Clickbank order page for a specific product, i.e. instead of a regular affiliate link sending them to the vendor's sales page. Essentially, it allows you to sell the product while bypassing the product's official sales page.

(Hopefully this makes sense. :p)

The main drawback of this approach (apart from the additional time/effort to get up and running) is that it also bypasses the cookie-implanting process, which leaves room for some of your prospective customers to then search for the product by name through Google and buy directly through the vendor's site without your affiliate commissions being credited.

However, if you go about it right (by obscuring/omitting the name of the product on your sales page, for example, giving customers less reason to suspect it's promoted elsewhere and little chance of them finding it either way), the odds of that can be quite significantly reduced.

It's perhaps good as a last resort, anyway, but I believe officially you require the permission of the product's vendor before you can do this. So if you do entertain the idea, don't run into it without making further inquiries.

Good luck, anyway.

Video is good it may be a bit long.
You have no limit on units or way of directy to the buy.
Customer feedback where is it?
Plus how can get email address so that you get email them back as moslty poeple will not buy the first time they come to a site

Pages with long videos like that can be hit or miss. I would try having an opt-out option where you could read a sales page instead of the video. When I worked in an office we had to have the sound down so a video like that would have been useless for me.

Good Luck!

Bring traffic to the website and track how well it converts. Then try to shorten the video and see which way is better.
No one can give you the right answer. It might be too long, too short, or perfect. The only way to find out is to test.

21 minutes is too long for a video. Honestly, I'd stick with 2 or 3 minutes maximum. Maybe instead of an order button right in their face, use a continue button where you could take them to a text pitch to sell them on the product.

Also, a digital picture of the product itself would be a nice touch.

No testimonials, $57 product (should be lower in my opinion), and not alot of traffic.