email subject lines that suck
as HTML or with any real tracking but I did sort of expect
a few opt-ins to a notification list I want to build.
Nada. zip.
I suspect my email subject line was, while clever for
me (I'm not very clever), totally irrelevant to my
subscribers... and had another problem too.
Here's my lousy subject line:
"actually, I don't suck at guitar"
(Yeah, I know you are howling "but you sure suck at
writing emails!")
Actually I write decent emails often.
Here's what went wrong. 2 things actually.
1. I used the word "suck" in the subject line. Probably
got the thing tagged as spam for many subs.
2. The subject line was an attempt to get curiosity but
did not actually hit on the "inner dialog" my readers
were having - it was probably perceived as a non-sequiter
and simply filtered-out as irrelevant.
The most powerful interuptive marketing either slides
right into the internal dialog the prospect is having
in his own funny head... or it promises relief from
the pain of that dialog - which is why "this is sooo
funny dude" will get you great open rates. People
want entertainment as a temporary escape from their
troubles... so if you can couch you message in entertaining
terms you are onto something.
Relevance to the internal dialog matters lots too. We
all know that here, right?
I guess my lousy subject line promised neither entertainment
nor relevance.
...
Well. Now I know one more thing about how not to
write email subject lines. Live and learn. You gotta
keep testing new ideas to see what works at this game.
Fortunately with email the cost is generally very low -
unlike direct mail where a disastrous headline could
cost you dearly.
:p
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