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Please critique my sales page

by ProEFI
3 replies
Hello everyone,
I just finished uploading my ebook to ejunkie. My sales page is up at fordinjectors.com.

I would appreciate any feedback on the sales page.

Also, I don't have any particular strategy for launching this product. I intend to promote it via Mustang Forums but other than that I'm not sure what else to do. Any suggestions are appreciated.

Thanks!
Andrew
#critique #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author artwebster
    Sorry Andrew,

    Pretty uninspiring, to say the least.

    It might help if you decided who you are so that potential customers know who they are dealing with. Are you "Fordinjectors.com", "Learning Capabilities" or "Sarah crafts with ink"?

    Do you think many Warriors will buy it?
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    Build it, make money, then build some more
    Some old school smarts would help - and here's to Rob Toth for his help. Bloody good stuff, even the freebies!

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  • Profile picture of the author mikeb209
    It doesnt make me want to buy it. It's not convincing enough. I have a 89 mustang myself and it's hot too. I could use that kind of info but your page just doesn't ignite a spark within me. You need more info, more trigger words, you need to get me excited and provide more benefits.
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