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Am I still doing it right ?

by ollybode
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I want to appreciate you guys for the valuable suggestions you gave me, when I ask you to check out my site and tell me your observations. I have tried to adjust some things and I just want to know whether am doing it right this time.

I will be glad to hear from you. Please your candid advice is welcome. just to let you know that am a newbie and i am ready to learn.click here to view the site
  • Profile picture of the author Jon Penberthy
    From a graphics side of things I would add a little more variety of colour, maybe add a couple more images to the page in the header and sidebar and you also want to look into building a list and adding a webform on the top right hand side of the sidebar .

    Jon
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    • Profile picture of the author ollybode
      thanks for that observation, am just trying to work things out.
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  • Profile picture of the author CBGCash
    I think you should get a theme with so many of them out there free. But overall it's simple and straight to the point.
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  • Profile picture of the author keyon
    You might want to find an native-English editor to look over the text. I know it's difficult for ESL writers to get it exactly right, but unfortunately that's the way it has to be if you want a site in English. It's the little things you're missing-- like verb tense and plurals.
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