Please review my TV Commercial

12 years ago

Was that Cindy Crawford with the facial mask? Btw, I think the TV ad is nice and entertaining.

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thomarv29 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Qamar

Was that Cindy Crawford with the facial mask? Btw, I think the TV ad is nice and entertaining.

Zul

Thanks for the feedback... No, not Cindy Crawford unfortunately lol
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- cashp0wer 12 years ago
  
  I just viewed your TV commercial (that does look like Cindy Crawford) and I thought it was very nice and I enjoyed it.
  
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  thomarv29 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by cashp0wer
  
  I just viewed your TV commercial (that does look like Cindy Crawford) and I thought it was very nice and I enjoyed it.
  
  Thanks for the feedback... Hopefully it turns into lots of visitors lol
  
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Alessandro Zamboni

12 years ago

Hi Robert, I can say "WOW!" because your tv ad hit just who is watching, and it will be easy to remember your website.
It's done with a good taste, within a normal customer's house, and it was a great idea.
Well assembled, it will send you a lot of visitors, I'm sure!

See you soon,
Alessandro Zamboni

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Andrew Skelly

12 years ago

From someone who used to make TV commercials professionally I give yours a thumbs up? However I'm sorry to say most commercials online don't translate into visitors or dollars. And most of the ones on TV for websites rarely bring an ROI. Time and money would be better spent building a blog network focused on your niche keywords.

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Daniel Evans

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Andrew Skelly

From someone who used to make TV commercials professionally I give yours a thumbs up? However I'm sorry to say most commercials online don't translate into visitors or dollars. And most of the ones on TV for websites rarely bring an ROI. Time and money would be better spent building a blog network focused on your niche keywords.

What statistics did you obtain to draw that hypothesis?

TV advertising can bring a significant ROI hence why companies do it. It's how programmes are funded. Companies aren't just taking punts. Many have been advertising on TV effectively for decades.

If you aren't seeing a good ROI, either your advert is bad or your product / service is bad - or both.

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TonyBabb

12 years ago

Great commercial. I can really see that working well for you.

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Michael Franklin

12 years ago

Hi Robert!

Very good ad...Cute and clever! Out of curiosity, how long did it take for you to film that commerical? I hear that even with short commericals, so much ends up on the cutting room floor.

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thomarv29

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Michael Franklin

Hi Robert!

Very good ad...Cute and clever! Out of curiosity, how long did it take for you to film that commerical? I hear that even with short commericals, so much ends up on the cutting room floor.

The commercial took about 8 hours to shoot, we have several different versions we are playing with to see what works best.

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powerofschool

12 years ago

Hi robert ,

The ad was really good.

Good commercial tv ad.

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Haris Tahic

12 years ago

Wow, nice..

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Raydal

12 years ago

Interesting. This follows the exact theme of a commercial
for entertainment.com on the last The Celebrity Apprentice

That team won so hopefully yours will as well.

-Ray Edwards

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Cataclysm1987

12 years ago

Lol!

Not entirely original but it made me laugh, therefore I'm open to your marketing. Nice work.

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Charlotte Jay

12 years ago

Clever lol I like it

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Bill Farnham 12 years ago

Fwiw, I listened to the video about 5 times and still have no idea what the woman says after she slaps the guy. That could just be me, but I generally don't have a problem understanding commercials.

Outside of that issue I like it.

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thomarv29

12 years ago

Yeah, we still have to re-dub the audio so hopefully it comes out clearer on the final version. Thanks

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ivan84m

12 years ago

LOL. I like the humorous context. Congrats, Robert.

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thomarv29 12 years ago

Originally Posted by ivan84m

LOL. I like the humorous context. Congrats, Robert.

Thanks, Hopefully everyone else likes it, we plan on doing a full series of these with different couples and situations all centered around the "I gotta Tap That" line.
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IMHunter

12 years ago

It was great. I liked it.

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Ashley Gable

12 years ago

I liked it too. It did feel like the Celebrity Apprentice ad. Yours though, didnt feel as corny and cheesy, so well done.

Good luck.

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Mike Hill

12 years ago

Oooh I'd tap that... LOL. That will get attention!

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thomarv29 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Mike Hill

Oooh I'd tap that... LOL. That will get attention!

Yeah, we plan on using that tag line a lot lol
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Tarik93

12 years ago

haha nice concept, I enjoyed it

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12 years ago

I like it. This ad combines a humorous situation with a play on words that involves your brand name. I gotta tap that is a great slogan.

The only thing that bugged me is the sound wasn't clear enough to hear everything the guy said.

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Daniel Evans

12 years ago

Originally Posted by thomarv29

Hey Guys,
I trust your opinions and wanted to show everyone the new commercial we produced for our website. This is the rough cut version that hasn't been re-dubbed or color corrected so please don't judge it by that. I hope its not too racy for prime time. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks
Robert

https://vimeo.com/39908337 Password: bigguns

I thought that was awesome!

I was pleasantly suprised.

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dmister

12 years ago

I just watched it too and I have to say that it is a really good advert and you also have a good slogan. As others have said the audio could be improved a little as it was hard to hear the woman speak. However, overall it was good and I would check out your website if I had watched it!

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thomarv29

12 years ago

Originally Posted by dmister

I just watched it too and I have to say that it is a really good advert and you also have a good slogan. As others have said the audio could be improved a little as it was hard to hear the woman speak. However, overall it was good and I would check out your website if I had watched it!

Thanks for the feedback... the audio hasnt been re-dubbed will be soon so it will be much clearer.

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ITMNOW

12 years ago

That's good! I had never heard of Tappocity

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thomarv29 12 years ago

Originally Posted by ITMNOW

That's good! I had never heard of Tappocity

It hasnt been officially launched yet but will be in the next few days. Thanks for the feedback!
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akmal

12 years ago

It is fun. Good luck for your launch later.

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Tadresources

12 years ago

Great commercial, and that does look like Cindy Crawford, lol!

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xxxJamesxxx

12 years ago

Ohhhhh I'd tap that!

Yeah it's good man... It's catchy

James Scholes

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philhunter 12 years ago

Its good, if you don't mind me asking is this the first time you have advertised on TV? What sort of ROI do you expect to get?
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Jay Wessman

12 years ago

Hahaha I like! Really funny and entertaining

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thomarv29 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Jay Wessman

Hahaha I like! Really funny and entertaining

Thanks for the feedback... we have actually launched the site now so its live but still needs some bugs worked out.
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StevenJones

12 years ago

Nice commercial, though some people might find it a bit vulgar, but these people don't have a sense of humor after all. Then again, humor doesn't always sell, but according to the warriors who've watched I think you did a good job.

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Eduard Stinga

12 years ago

Here's my opinion as a Film student: I like it overall, it's nice, catchy, funny - the only thing that I don't like is the last 2 shots; there's a medium shot/close-up of the guy at the laptop then you cut directly into a close-up of the girl at the laptop as well, it just doesn't seem to flow (at least for me)

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thomarv29

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Eduard Stinga

Here's my opinion as a Film student: I like it overall, it's nice, catchy, funny - the only thing that I don't like is the last 2 shots; there's a medium shot/close-up of the guy at the laptop then you cut directly into a close-up of the girl at the laptop as well, it just doesn't seem to flow (at least for me)

We have a few different cuts of the commercial so the other ones are probably a little more congruent.

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GodMode52

12 years ago

Well done, i like the idea

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