Can WF Critic My Squeeze Page....

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***If in wrong section i apologise, wasn't sure which to put it in***

I may regret doing this, but here goes

Code:
http://geodin.info/listbuild/
Please be as honest as possible. All comments are welcome.
#critic #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author hashbury
    I am not a squeeze page type of guy, but from what I can see on the page I can not watch the video and the download button tries to get me to login through my facebook account which I would never do for any site.

    When trying to watch the video it pops up enter your email address below, but there is no where to enter an email address.
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  • Profile picture of the author sovereignn
    I don't get it....
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  • Profile picture of the author georgedinmore
    I think i need to change this then...

    The idea is the viral nature of the download link below. But never mind, i'll change now.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jim Nariel
    Hi

    A squeeze page has usually

    1. A Knock Out Title
    2. Bullet points showing you the benefits of what you are offering
    3. An Optin form

    I think there are some technical issues as the video does not play - just says put in your email address (no opt in form)

    It looks like I can access something by clicking on the download button.

    On the positiive side you may have something of value to give away to get people on your list - not sure

    However the squeeze page needs to have a killer title and be full of benefits to your visitor. They should know at least what they are getting for free

    As there is no optin form then you cant send emails that are personal to the visitor and your list will be a lot less effective. I suggest you provide an optin form on your squeeze page

    Hope this helps
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  • Profile picture of the author Exel
    It's funny that when I click on 'play' it says "Enter your email below for instant
    access", but there is nowhere to enter email below

    Whole thing is very confusing in terms of what you are offering and what people
    should do. My briefest advice - implement autoresponder opt-in form and tell people
    exactly what you have and why they should enter their information.
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