3 websites

What would you recommended in changing the looks?

All three sites are awful looking. Clean it up, take out all of the ads and put maybe two or three of them back in. Also, reduce the number of columns from three to two. Looks a lot cleaner that way.

Also, the last one is good in the respect that you are targeting a specific type of car (hybrids). But the first two...what audience are you targeting? You're all over the place with both of them.

Lastly, the content is abysmal at best. I tried reading it, but couldn't get past the first paragraph. It was the most generic article that I think that I ever read.

Take it from a nine year auto industry car guy...fix it, or it will go no where.

PM me if you need any additional advice.

Don't go to Motor Trend, we don't allow backlinking to another potential competitor (I'm a moderator there)...

Thank you all for your help. I guess I should of explained a little more on these sites. The last time I posted for help on a different forum, it was up for 5 minutes and was taken down. So I will start from the first site and see if you could help me a little more.

First, the reason for me doing this is i injurd my shoulder to the point where I can not work a physitcal job for the rest of my life. And im not going to have a desk job for $10 hr. Need real money for me and my family.

So after looking at my x-ray of my shoulder and saying FML, I started looking for ways to make money online. Like any newbie would see, a website could make you lots of money online. So I came across SBI and made the elitefastcars site with them. After trying my hardest to make some thing happen, months later I have no traffic and no point to sell any thing with no traffic. Then I thought way im I building this site when I can pay to have some one bring traffic. So I did. I hired an SEO team of 186 a month. I still have low traffic and its been 3 months with them.

Right after I gave the site to the team to SEO the site, I started another site with SBI, elitehybridcars. I didn't want to bump heads with the team on the elitefastcars site. So I built the hybrid site, paid for some articals, paid for 500 search engine submissions. Posted in forums, facebook, yahoo, artical directory's and so on. Still very low traffic. I had ad sense but some A hole clicked away and i got kicked off and the appeal was denied.

So after the second site wasn't going any where I started looking for ways to make money with out a website. I came across TB (traffic brokers). I signed up with them for a 7 day trail. Well when I did they offered a free website. I couldn't pass this up. All I had to do is buy a domain name and pay for hosting. So I did and named it elite-custom-cars. Yes that web site was handed to me the way you see it. I just payed to have it submitted to 500 search engines, submmited 50 artical directory's.

So now I have 3 sites that have no traffic or make any money. I haven't made 1 penny, yes that right not 1 penny. Not even on my dashboards for TB, clickbank, chitika for my ads.

I spent thousands of $ and hundresds of hours, averge 8-10 hours per day and weekends on trying to find that click in my head to get it. For some reason im not getting it. I understand what needs to be done but I cant figure out how to make it work. I know having 3 websites all being related to automotive should bring in a crap load of traffic and should make alot of money. For some reason I cant figure it out.



Thanks for your time,
Justin Erickson