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12 years ago

I checked it out and it's pretty good, you're not overwhelming them with too much info which is good for a squeeze page.

Being that it's computer related you might consider adding a simple header with a computer graphic, I think it would give a better first appearance. Other than that everything looks great!

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ttdub

12 years ago

Originally Posted by ToddRestrepo

I checked it out and it's pretty good, you're not overwhelming them with too much info which is good for a squeeze page.

Being that it's computer related you might consider adding a simple header with a computer graphic, I think it would give a better first appearance. Other than that everything looks great!

Nice Job!
Todd

Thanks so much! I appreciate it.

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Warrior Roy

12 years ago

I'd delete the footer: Email Marketing by AWeber.

Otherwise, I think it should do you well.

I especially like that my attention is drawn to filling in my email address, and I like that I don't have to add my name. Also very good is prominent use of the word: FREE.

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ttdub

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Warrior Roy

I'd delete the footer: Email Marketing by AWeber.

Otherwise, I think it should do you well.

I especially like that my attention is drawn to filling in my email address, and I like that I don't have to add my name. Also very good is prominent use of the word: FREE.

I didn't even know I could erase the aweber thing, but I found it and did. Thanks! That's why I ask you guys.

And I appreciate it.

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Rich Struck

12 years ago

I signed up and when I clicked the download link I was taken to a 404 page instead. Might want to fix that.

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ttdub

12 years ago

I figured it out! I accidentally changed the URL to it, but didn't change it in the auto-responder emails.... I fixed it and will PM you the download link.

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ttdub

12 years ago

Any other suggestions?

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cashp0wer 12 years ago

I agree that a header with some kind of computer logo would look great - besides that your site looks really good. Good job - hard work pays off doesn't it?
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- TonyLaw 12 years ago
  
  Looks nice. Here's some free clip art from Microsoft if you want to add an image to your header: Images - Clip Art, Photos, Sounds, & Animations - Office.com
  
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ttdub

12 years ago

I really appreciate it! Hopefully it will. =)

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jaygonsalves

12 years ago

Should convert well. I'll be taking some pointers from this page!

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ttdub

12 years ago

can I really use that clipart?

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vegaskev

12 years ago

Ttdub. Check out clipart.com. A lot of their stuff is outdated but its only $39 per month with noe contract and you'll have unlimited access. Also I use findicons.com to grab great quality stuff to create my own vectors for headers, etc. While findicons is a "source for icons", I've found that a lot of their "icons" are built from high quality images...and yes they are all free. Just make sure that u use the left sidebar (after your initial search) to select the proper license usage so you follow the respective laws. Then grab a free copy of gimp image editing software and have a bkast making your header. Site content is great, but I agree with the others, that you need a header.

Good luck with your campaign!!!

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derek.ang

12 years ago

Great, let us know the results. a suggestion, i think the page is too plain

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jonmay

12 years ago

Looks great! And I think you adding the social media buttons were a great thought too!

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ttdub 12 years ago

Thanks so much guys! I'll work on a better header tomorrow. I appreciate all the kind words. I feel like it was worth all the effort. Thank you!
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