My Gift To You Warriors

Prashant_W · 03-02-2009, 05:13 AM

Hey people, at long last, after having learnt oh so much here, I'm gonna be giving a gift back to you warriors.

For quite a while, I've been studying the art of copywriting. So of course, I've come
across numerous headlines that have been proven to work wonders!

So I thought I'd share 5 of them. And yup, you can tweak these headlines to make them suit your product as well.

1) Do You Make These Mistakes In English?

2) They Laughed At Me When I Sat Down To Play The Guitar... But When I Started To Play...

3) To Men Who Want To Quit Work Someday

4) Do You Do Any Of These 10 Embarrassing Things?

5) It’s A Shame For You Not To Make Good Money... When These Men Do It So Easily

Well, I hope you guys find this useful!

cheers,

prashant

DominicTFY · 03-02-2009, 09:29 AM

hey prashant,

A pity you should have posted this to the 'copywriters' directory instead of this main discussion forum. You'd have gotten a lot more appreciation there. Haha...

Traffic-Bug · 03-02-2009, 10:01 AM

agree they are captivating titles but not "killer" titles.

Prashant_W · 03-05-2009, 03:42 AM

yah i guess they would have dominic..oh well..haha...

anyway traffic-bug...you couldn't be anymore mistaken! the first headline is one of the most powerful headlines ever! No BS whatsoever! you can find out more about this awesome headline, and the awesome copy that followed here.

Max Sackheim's 40 Year Control Ad: "Do You Make These Mistakes In English?"

(No affiliation to the site whatsoever)

03-02-2009, 05:13 AM	#1
Prashant_W HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: , , Singapore. Posts: 337 Thanks: 52 Thanked 15 Times in 13 Posts	My Gift To You Warriors Hey people, at long last, after having learnt oh so much here, I'm gonna be giving a gift back to you warriors. For quite a while, I've been studying the art of copywriting. So of course, I've come across numerous headlines that have been proven to work wonders! So I thought I'd share 5 of them. And yup, you can tweak these headlines to make them suit your product as well. 1) Do You Make These Mistakes In English? 2) They Laughed At Me When I Sat Down To Play The Guitar... But When I Started To Play... 3) To Men Who Want To Quit Work Someday 4) Do You Do Any Of These 10 Embarrassing Things? 5) It’s A Shame For You Not To Make Good Money... When These Men Do It So Easily Well, I hope you guys find this useful! cheers, prashant

03-02-2009, 09:29 AM	#2
DominicTFY Dominic Tay War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 223 Thanks: 10 Thanked 22 Times in 17 Posts Social Networking	Re: My Gift To You Warriors hey prashant, A pity you should have posted this to the 'copywriters' directory instead of this main discussion forum. You'd have gotten a lot more appreciation there. Haha...
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03-02-2009, 10:01 AM	#3
Traffic-Bug Senior Warrior Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Oregon Posts: 1,196 Thanks: 3 Thanked 69 Times in 61 Posts Social Networking	Re: My Gift To You Warriors agree they are captivating titles but not "killer" titles.
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03-05-2009, 03:42 AM	#4
Prashant_W HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: , , Singapore. Posts: 337 Thanks: 52 Thanked 15 Times in 13 Posts	Re: My Gift To You Warriors yah i guess they would have dominic..oh well..haha... anyway traffic-bug...you couldn't be anymore mistaken! the first headline is one of the most powerful headlines ever! No BS whatsoever! you can find out more about this awesome headline, and the awesome copy that followed here. Max Sackheim's 40 Year Control Ad: "Do You Make These Mistakes In English?" (No affiliation to the site whatsoever)