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Please critique my sales page..

by Gaetane Ross
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Hi Warriors, I would really appreciate your honest opinion on my sales page.

http://HowToBeYourOwnVet.com

Thank you,

Gaetane
#critique #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author dvduval
    It might be good to emphasize how much money will be saved earlier in the article. And for the design, I think you need a little padding on the left side.
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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Ames
    The text is too close to the border. There should be some space there for reader comfort.

    Have you tested cats, horses, hamsters or plan to have a sales page for each? If not perhaps you are missing out.

    Testimonials. Same problem with the text right up next to the border. The font is a bit strange too. It would amp up the testimonials to have a photo of the person giving it. An audo or video would amp them up even more.

    The picture of Derby is a bit dark. I would get one with more contrast.

    There is a horizontal white line right below the header graphic that goes from side to side and another white/blueish line going down the left side by the text. They are distracting.

    Do You Know How To Save Your Dogs Life In An Emergency? Would You Like To Save Thousands Of Dollars In Vet Bills? --- Test these.. I think its a mixed message for different markets. I like the Save Your Dogs Life angle. I for one would not want to be my own vet to save money. What if I killed Derby?
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