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Old 03-11-2009, 04:09 PM   #1
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Hey Warriors,

I am just on my way out, but also just finished most of the work on my
blog and would like your review.
What should I improve? What annoys you? What makes you want to
click away the page? etc.

Here is the blog: http://www.u12blog.com/binaural-tones

Please any comments and input are welcome.

I'll be back in a few hours to make your improvements.

Thanks Warriors

Naithan

EDIT: The blog is not hosted anymore on wordpress it is hosted on my own domain.
Can I now please get feedback on the content and layout and not on hosting. Thanks

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Old 03-11-2009, 04:18 PM   #2
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HI Naithan,

I suggest that you break down each article into a summary that goes on page one, with a link to "Read More" that leads to the entire page.

You can also add thumb images to items that you are selling to get attention to those items.

I would also suggest a "MY Product Review" area where people can see products you recommend.

Lastly, if you are a serious about your topic I strongly recommend your own domain with WordPress installed. You will run into limitation with any hosting setup.

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Old 03-11-2009, 04:24 PM   #3
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Hi Naithan,

My first thought was this:

Wordpress.com does not allow affiliate links. It's against the rules of their TOS. You run the risk of having your blog deleted at anytime if you have affiliate links... I would suggest setting up a free blog at Blogger.com since they do allow affiliate links, before you start promoting a site that will most likely be removed quickly.

(Your best bet is to have your own hosted WordPress blog with your own domain... you can use affiliate links on your own hosted WP blog, and you have more control of your overall site.)

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You could've at least started your blog and given us the link. You'd get a lot more responses that way.
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Old 03-11-2009, 07:34 PM   #5
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Ok edited my post with the link in it. Sorry about that, as I said I was just on my way out.

Do you often stray from tasks? Do you not get enough sleep? Are the Days to short?
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Old 03-11-2009, 07:52 PM   #6
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Get a self hosted blog or maybe yor go to your blog tommorow only to find it has magically dissapered it happens. All your hard work would of been for nothing over a few little affiliate links. Self hosted is the way to go.

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Old 03-11-2009, 08:00 PM   #7
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Thanks for the advice I am working on it. But can somebody please give me feedback on the rest of my blog (so long as it is still there).

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If you're going to use Wordpress you might as well just get the self-hosted one because then you can ad Google Adsense and affiliate links.

Or if you want to add adsense and affiliate links for free, go with Blogger.

I have absolutely no idea what your blog is about even though I read the description lol Are you trying to make money off of this blog or what're you trying to do with it?

EDIT: You do have affiliate links on there, your blog is going to get banned! Please switch over to free Blogger where it's free to have adsense and affiliate links or host your Wordpress blog yourself.
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Hosted on my own domain: http://www.u12blog.com/binaural-tones

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